I love how this is ridiculous and funny at the same time, without overdoing it, and how it makes my heart hurt a little. For some reason the formatting takes me out of it a little, however. Especially the line spacing of "...drinking/ I..." and "...funny/ the way...". For me it's too much of a pause and I get distracted. Overall, I do like the poem. I'm a big Jeffrey McDaniel fan usually.
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For some reason the formatting takes me out of it a little, however. Especially the line spacing of "...drinking/ I..." and "...funny/ the way...". For me it's too much of a pause and I get distracted.
Overall, I do like the poem. I'm a big Jeffrey McDaniel fan usually.
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Thanks for posting this! ♥
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