711: Letter To The Woman Who Stopped Writing Me Back

Dec 29, 2009 00:50

"Letter To The Woman Who Stopped Writing Me Back ( Read more... )

jeffrey mcdaniel

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flickersofaie December 30 2009, 06:05:04 UTC
That's two stunner poems in a row. They make a good end-of-the-year present :)

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amnotcute December 30 2009, 14:09:08 UTC
So much this. Thank you.

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eranim December 30 2009, 06:49:25 UTC
Efff I love this.

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klaen December 30 2009, 07:02:39 UTC
I love how this is ridiculous and funny at the same time, without overdoing it, and how it makes my heart hurt a little.
For some reason the formatting takes me out of it a little, however. Especially the line spacing of "...drinking/ I..." and "...funny/ the way...". For me it's too much of a pause and I get distracted.
Overall, I do like the poem. I'm a big Jeffrey McDaniel fan usually.

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to_someplace December 30 2009, 19:58:49 UTC
You cannot not love McDaniel. He's awesome.
Thanks for posting this! ♥

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indigo_mindset December 30 2009, 22:02:58 UTC
It's so beautiful how he describes this frustration.

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