695: To his lost lover

[exceptindreams]

"To his lost lover

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[amber_lily]

=(

:c

[babbss]

The last two lines.

[shadowings]

This is an exception to my like for long poems. Something about it just sets me off badly. As soon as I read this:
or picked for himself the pear of her heart,
or lifted her hand to where his own heart

was a small, dark, terrified bird
in her grip. Where it hurt

it was like a switch for me.

[howeverbrief]

Wow, this made my heart hurt a little.

[ti]

i really like this, in a heartbreaking way.