Speedwriting Fills
Title: Improvements
Rating: K
Continuity: G1
Characters: Red Alert, Bumblebee
Disclaimer: Don't own
Prompt: 1. Home improvements
( Improvements )
Rating: K
Continuity: G1
Characters: Red Alert, Bumblebee
Disclaimer: Don't own
Prompt: 1. Home improvements
( Improvements )
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6. Lazy days are lazy - as the young are best able to attest.
5. You just like killing off Jazz and Prowl don't you?
Granted, in their line of work, they are the ones most targeted, most vulnerable, and most likely to attacked deliberately and not at random.
4.Poor Cliffjumper. More Mirage. It's all better now - even if they can't go back to the way things were.
3.LOL!
I like this introduction of the twins.
Poor Prowl, being ambushed, despite taking precautions.
(I wonder how many times Sides and Sunny pulled off that trick to keep themselves alive - did not feel like it was spur of the moment. LOTS is enough)
2.Nice.
Smokey, a grounded Seeker.
(have you read Ante-Luce's fics? cause she too has a seeker that's lost wings. Hmm, wonder how prevalent this idea is ... *goes off to search for more hidden/unknown flightless Seekers*)
1. You've captured Red Alert Perfectly!
And Bumblebee, he is trustworthy by the paranoid mech's standards. Cool.
Love all of these.
Thanks.
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Due Warning: Eh... I don't actually like killing them off, it's just that they're *easy* to kill, for exactly the reasons you gave. :-/ I really do like it when they live happily ever after.
What You Wish For: Indeed. At least they're good, now, though.
Searching for Sparks: :D Yes, they have practiced it before. I mean, it is handy having only one spark signature between them. ^.^
Never Forget: I have read her fics. Let me know if you find any good ones!
Improvements: Hehe, thanks. ^.^ And yes. Bumblebee's a pretty trustworthy guy, after all. :)
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Never Forget: I'm sure he'll reformat back into a Seeker eventually. :) As for how he coped... not sure of that myself...
Searching for Sparks: Hehehe... Well, I will say, Prowl's reaction, or lack of it, to them earned him a lot of respect in their optics. They like bots who can keep their cool. And agreed; Prowl, Second in Command and a VIB, in a scrap yard, is rather amusing. ^.^ Glad you liked the descriptions; they're fun to do. ^.^
What You Wish For: Me too. :) And agreed again. Relationships like that are fun to explore.
Due Warning: hahaha... Yeah... I won't say it was fun to write, but that last scene did bring a smile to my face. And thanks! Always good to hear I'm improving. ^.^
Lazy Day: Hahah... yep. But Prowl ain't there, so they can afford a few cartoons and whatnot. And that does make sense a little bit? Like Warm Fuzzies... a happy story that brings warmth and peace? I've read a few of those in the past. :)
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