[FIC] FF7: Enigma

Feb 23, 2006 17:01

... I got out of my Bleach-obsessed mood and went back into FF7-obssessed mood, especially when I rewatched AC. So whee! More fic!

It's kind of messy and everything, but it makes sense. Really!

Also, it's 5pm and I haven't eaten anything since last night. And I feel fine. Um?

Written for 1character.

Enigma
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forgottenlover February 23 2006, 14:54:02 UTC
::paws it, then pokes you for Vincent:: Lovely ficcies

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evocates February 24 2006, 08:21:43 UTC
XD

... I swear, I'll make the accounts when my real life gets less fucked. Probably during the plane ride back to Uni. Really.

-headdesk-

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forgottenlover February 24 2006, 19:40:52 UTC
I believe you... suuuuuuure ::hugs::

hahaha watch me not pay attention

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shahni February 23 2006, 15:21:22 UTC
*Clapsclapsclaps* beautiful as always, Alex-darling. *sigh* Vincent, you bittersweet fool. *grins* Waaaai. Heeheehee. Me likes, me likes!.

I did notice a fewww typos and errors, just pointing 'em out here!

Corrections:

-Sweat and blood, he realized, stuck to skin more easily than any honey.
-Blue reminds Vincent ofher, for it was calm and beautiful, just like her.
-It was only recently that he realized just how true the golden saying was.

*grins* sorry, they just caught my eye. I love yoooou!!

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evocates February 23 2006, 22:58:17 UTC
Thank you, Shahni-dear. XD

He's an incredibly idiotic person sometimes, isn't he?

Wee thank you! But the last one is supposed to be 'olden'. 'Golden' just doesn't sound right in my head. Um... yeah. XD

-huggles- I love you tooooooo~

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sleepykelvina February 23 2006, 17:23:22 UTC
This is a really interesting writing style. I thought the short, disjointed sentences managed to paint a larger picture, saying just enough to get the story across. I thought you captured the character beautifully.

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evocates February 23 2006, 23:00:50 UTC
Thank you!

Vincent's thoughts, actually, pretty much anyone's thoughts, are kind of like that. They don't flow completely, and are usually disjointed. Glad that I kind of got that point across. XD

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otilu February 25 2006, 14:12:33 UTC
Such great Vincent sentences made my day when I first read these. ^^ And even rereading is brilliant. I always love how making an author cut things down into such short snippets can reveal more about their version of a character than even the longest introspection.

Especially, #35 - Flow, and #47 - Honor... and #31 - Surface! I get the feeling it's Tifa talking. ^-^;

Love~

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evocates February 25 2006, 14:45:49 UTC
Thank you! Sometimes a short sentence just says more somehow, doesn't it? I still feel as if some of them are kind of long and pointless though... >>;

It's probably Tifa. I have no idea, really, that sentence just popped up in my head when I saw the theme, heh.

-hugs-

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blackcrow776 March 23 2006, 01:36:11 UTC
so very good :) you always get Vincent down to a tee :) *huggles* I really like the sentence thing as always!

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evocates March 23 2006, 13:42:15 UTC
Me = Lazy, therefore the 1sentence thing is easy. XP

Thanks, by the way! -hugs-

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