OMFG... I don't want to leave stupid feedback, but I just have to say how hot this is. Written beautifully and I love the plot. Despite them being potential rivals they still wanting each other from the first time they meet, is great. I also love your very smart Ian.
I am still quite amazed by the fic; it delivered quite a punch on a peaceful Sunday morning. All I can say is that I loved every word of it. Wonderful, just wonderful.
... I honestly don't know where Ian came from. It was a throwaway line that he's the third Alpha within the Fellowship, and then he proceeds to take over the fic. I'm so pleased that you like that, and the fic too! ♥ Thank you so much!
I love power and dominance conflicts in my smut... not so much established BDSM-type things, but dynamics that are being played out, and this is EVERYTHING I think is hot and awesome about that particular line of thought. Love it.
Oh hell, part of why I don't write smut often is because I'm incapable of writing smut withou power play somehow, and there are very few situations in which it fits. I share your love for that kind of power conflicts in smut - means that the characters are truly equal, you know? Ahh, I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and thank you! ♥
Very strong, powerful fic. Exceptionally well written and damn hot. Perfect for a lazy Sunday. Thank you. Needless to say, that I would love to read more of your stuff. Nuff said!
this AU or a/b/o stuff is still new (although i did to look in AO3 after you provided the link with the previous fic's comment section) to me, and it has that quality of a new gut-shot, erotic trigger that's like, can we be frank here, a spontaneous orgasm. ok, maybe that should be reserved for the knotting but it has such a strong lead-up.
“Viggo and Sean have never fought each other for dominance despite being Alphas who are so close in age and physicality. They even live in close spaces with each other.” ...“You know, it ain’t odd,” he said. “It’s a fucking miracle.” had to giggle as dom bit back "wierd and unnatural". he knows not to blurt, which is good.
Sean had spent too much time talking alone with Peter and Fran as they tried to convince him to turn away from his instincts. mission impossible, that
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On Sean putting out his cigarette on his tongue: he once said it in an interview somewhere that it's the one really cool party trick he knows, and there's a dead area on his tongue where it can be done. I watched Eastern Promises after reading that, and my assumption - until even now - is that Viggo learned that trick from Sean. Ehehehe.
And also re: the complexities, I swear I can write an essay about my version of this universe by now, because obviously they've managed to create a society, but in a world where instincts run so rampant there's got to be changes that are different from our own. I got irate at a lot of Sherlock fics just shove heat suppressants/birth control pills at Omega and call it a day at those changes, but that might be because I'm a little too enamoured with Alphas and how they work. One day I'll write a fic with an Alpha female. /stares at Sharpe and Teresa. You caused this, by the way
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Okay, I have been trying to come up with something coherent to say for the last four hours during which I have been far too distracted by this to get some serious studying done (or maybe that's the coffee overdose...) so I guess I will have to leave a slightly rambling comment... First of all, I loved it. I was sceptical when I skimmed the post with explanations and read mpreg somewhere (not my cup of tea) but then I was curious and it was so worth it. Love the alpha, beta, omega concept and Sean Viggo battling their instincts. Love them growling and baring their teeths and necks and their almost violent coupling and the desire to mark each other. And I love your Ian. Thank you!
Ian is obviously a crowd-pleaser but god I love the man so, so much. Serena!!!!!
But ahhh, I'm so glad you took a chance with this and that you like it despite mpreg and such not being your cup of tea. *_*! There is a tag in AO3 for this trope (I should call it a trope now), but I don't think anyone but me have been writing so intensely about Alphas alone. But if you're interested at all about Omegas, they're all there. :3
Thank you so much for reading and comment, noa! ♥!
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I am still quite amazed by the fic; it delivered quite a punch on a peaceful Sunday morning. All I can say is that I loved every word of it. Wonderful, just wonderful.
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Exceptionally well written and damn hot.
Perfect for a lazy Sunday.
Thank you.
Needless to say, that I would love to read more of your stuff.
Nuff said!
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Oh yes, there will be stuff. :3
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“Viggo and Sean have never fought each other for dominance despite being Alphas who are so close in age and physicality. They even live in close spaces with each other.” ...“You know, it ain’t odd,” he said. “It’s a fucking miracle.” had to giggle as dom bit back "wierd and unnatural". he knows not to blurt, which is good.
Sean had spent too much time talking alone with Peter and Fran as they tried to convince him to turn away from his instincts. mission impossible, that ( ... )
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And also re: the complexities, I swear I can write an essay about my version of this universe by now, because obviously they've managed to create a society, but in a world where instincts run so rampant there's got to be changes that are different from our own. I got irate at a lot of Sherlock fics just shove heat suppressants/birth control pills at Omega and call it a day at those changes, but that might be because I'm a little too enamoured with Alphas and how they work. One day I'll write a fic with an Alpha female. /stares at Sharpe and Teresa. You caused this, by the way ( ... )
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But ahhh, I'm so glad you took a chance with this and that you like it despite mpreg and such not being your cup of tea. *_*! There is a tag in AO3 for this trope (I should call it a trope now), but I don't think anyone but me have been writing so intensely about Alphas alone. But if you're interested at all about Omegas, they're all there. :3
Thank you so much for reading and comment, noa! ♥!
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