Comments | evitably: SPN fic: Vertigo | Dean/Alastair

evitably

SPN fic: Vertigo | Dean/Alastair | PG-13

Jul 29, 2011 02:12

Title: Vertigo
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: 4.16, "On the Head of a Pin"
Wordcount: ~1.2k
Genre: Gen, horror, angst
Characters/pairings: Dean/Alastair.
Contents/warnings/kinks: Allusions to torture, mindgames, amnesia, stalking, flashbacks
A/N: Written for blindfold_spn to the prompt Alistair/Dean, early S4, Dean doesn't remember. Many thanks to viridian_magpie for taking a quick ( Read more... )

less than: 5k, rating: pg-13, dean winchester, .spn, alastair, -fic

Comments 24

maypoles August 22 2011, 19:34:58 UTC

Congrats! ☆ Your fic is recced here at sawedoff_recs.

evitably August 22 2011, 21:24:59 UTC

Thank you so much!! <3

honeylocusttree August 22 2011, 20:16:00 UTC

I don't know if I ever read this. I thought I had, but it all seemed new to me just looking at it now. I'm glad I checked it out, as it's pretty damn amazing. Love how well it flows, how inevitable and absolute and true everything about it feels. The clarity of perception meshes so nicely with all the things that are hidden. Excellent stuff.

evitably August 22 2011, 21:33:16 UTC

I wish I had something better to say than 'thank you', but ... thank you. Your comment has rendered me speechless with joy.

I just. Thank you.

amberdreams August 22 2011, 21:08:57 UTC

Saw this in Sawedoff recs. What a chilling and gut wrenching little fic. Dean's disorientation is palpable and given when it is set, that could really be Alastair which makes this even more scary.

evitably August 22 2011, 21:31:08 UTC

I honestly can't tell you whether it's Alastair or not - I just don't know myself. That really helped me spiral along with Dean; it makes me very happy to hear it comes across to the reader.

Thank you for the comment!

amberdreams August 22 2011, 21:35:06 UTC

No I'm glad you left it open, it is more effective that way!

evitably August 22 2011, 21:37:03 UTC

After having put some distance between me and the fic, I have to agree!

salty_catfish August 23 2011, 18:31:55 UTC

Love how you wrote Dean's disorientation!

evitably August 24 2011, 04:10:55 UTC

Thank you! That's very nice of you to say!

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evitably August 27 2011, 13:06:42 UTC

Thanks! Your comment is much appreciated!

I don't know what you mean by 'this subject' - if you mean Dean/Alastair, then I've written it both in 'Leave it' and 'Let's pretend I'm dead'. But if you mean the amnesia aspect, then I'm working on a couple of fics that are somewhat similar.