SPN fic: When you put up a fight | Sam/Dean | R

[evitably]

Title: When you put up a fight
Rating: R
Wordcount: ~2,600
Genres: PWP, schmoop
Pairings: Sam/Dean
Contents/warnings/kinks: incest, established relationship, hurt!Sam, cockwarming, semi-public sexual acts, orgasm denial, sexual touching without the intent to cause climax
Spoilers: None.
Beta'd by: taelynhawker
Disclaimer: SPN and its characters do not belong

Comments

[fleeting_wings]

wow. this was kinky, sure, but surprisingly heart-warming and gentle. the ending ♥ amazing voices and descriptions.

[evitably]

Thank you so much! I was very surprised when it went from humor to such thorough schmoop, but I can't say I regret it!

[bree_black]

This was not at all what I expected it would be, and I mean that in a good way.

Dean was looking at him a little oddly beneath his eyelashes: not unlike the lust Sam was used to seeing, but not that, either.

I think that line summarizes it nicely. This is a different kind of sexy, and a different kind of love, than I'm used to reading. I really, really enjoyed it.

[evitably]

I have to admit that I was at a bit of a loss about what I should list under the warnings, because while it contains everything that's listed there, it isn't really what the fic ended up being about!

Thank you so much for this comment. I'm very glad to hear you liked it!

[insertcode11]

Somehow it's kinky as hell and yet a lazy sweet gentle that makes me smile.

LOVE your descriptions, your subtle characterizations, and the overall hotness of this. Nice job, hon! :)

[evitably]

Oh, thank you so very much such a lovely and thoughtful comment! It makes me happy that you were left with a smile - best compliment ever, I think! =)

[si_star_x]

Okay, I read the warnings but clicked anyway. The first part of this was lovely -- an exchange I could imagine them having. I did skip through the actual... y'know. But hey, still awesome. Good job.

[evitably]

Oh! I'm sorry the kinks didn't work for you, but I'm inexplicably happy that you gave this a shot anyway as well as commented on what worked for you (as well as didn't!). Thank you so, so much - I appreciate this more than I can say.

[si_star_x]

Thank you for responding. ♥
I am actually going to warrant this fic with a re-read later, because I did absolutely love the beginning, and it was only a few paragraphs I missed. I have no opposition to this type of writing, so actually... I deserve to add fuel to my spark of Wincest lovin' that I know exists. I know feedback is the best fix, so I am flattered that you appreciate it.

[evitably]

I'm speechless - thank you!!

[openmoments]

I like how different this was. It was gentle, yet still sexy. Good job. :)

[evitably]

Gentle wasn't exactly what I had planned for it, but still, I'm very pleased with how this ended up being. Thank you for the comment!