Comments | evil_little_dog: FMA Fic: "Marking Time" 36/? Adult Rating

evil_little_dog

FMA Fic: "Marking Time" 36/? Adult Rating

Jul 07, 2009 08:15

Marking Time
evil_little_dog

Summary: A treacherous trick leaves Al and Winry on the run from the military and Edward kidnapped and presumed dead, in danger of losing his innocence, his self-respect and his life.

Rating: Adult overall due to violence, sexual situations and all sorts of other fun stuff.

Disclaimer: Sekritly, I dress in a cow suit and fight ( Read more... )

fma fic, marking time, fma

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evil_little_dog July 7 2009, 14:00:07 UTC

*grins*

Thanks!

nebroadwe July 7 2009, 18:34:38 UTC

Boy, every time I start sympathizing with someone in this story, you kill him/her off. Poor Rose. And this take on Hohenheim is even more inscrutable than the manga's (pre-backstory, anyway). Hmm.

evil_little_dog July 7 2009, 20:32:32 UTC

Boy, every time I start sympathizing with someone in this story, you kill him/her off.

Really? Hmmm. *eyes Ed*

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nebroadwe July 7 2009, 23:26:41 UTC

Besides, killing off Ed wouldn't advance the story ... would it?

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kessiebabe July 7 2009, 23:31:24 UTC

yay its alive! *dances dance of joy*

And cool chapter.. Winry and alchemy? Thats going to be interesting...
Hm what Edward might say to this..... *grins*

Hope we can read more soon!

evil_little_dog July 8 2009, 00:11:34 UTC

I'm working on the next chapter. *grin* I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. :D

cornerofmadness July 8 2009, 02:10:29 UTC

just like my edits said, needs more Roy. you should hear him whine.

stilllike this lots

evil_little_dog July 8 2009, 02:13:14 UTC

Yeah, yeah, Shen, you'll get your time.

And thanks. :D

cornerofmadness July 8 2009, 02:35:26 UTC

make it naked time - Shen

evil_little_dog July 8 2009, 02:36:46 UTC

Oh, shut up, Shen. :P

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mulzrule July 9 2009, 18:47:36 UTC

OMG I was on the edge of my seat when I saw this! (well, ok so I actually feel out of the chair but that's beside the point. ;P) You and COM really hate Rose don't you? But that was so cool making her the new Lust. Wrath giggling at Hoho's name made me grin. And so did the bit about Elicia being corrupted by the Armstrongs. I wonder what Maes would have to say about that? *snicker* Oh and,"“You won’t suffer.” The promise fell like stones in her skull, rattling around and echoing there." was my favorite line. *loves you!*

evil_little_dog July 12 2009, 22:28:30 UTC

Hahaha...who said anything about Rose being Lust?

*giggles evilly*

mulzrule July 13 2009, 13:52:57 UTC

But, BUT! You're so bad. ;P

evil_little_dog July 14 2009, 00:50:45 UTC

*points at icon*

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