Rachel/Keith - The Consequences of Flirtation - 1/3 - NC-17 (obv.......... :))
anonymous
February 12 2009, 00:14:46 UTC
Sometimes, Keith crossed the line. It was easy to do with Rachel, to joke a little too much, to flirt a little too obviously. Usually, Rachel just blushed or shot him a dirty look and he knew to back off. But, sometimes, she got mad, especially when they'd been drinking
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Rachel/Keith - The Consequences of Flirtation - 2/3 - NC-17
anonymous
February 12 2009, 00:17:06 UTC
She placed the palms of her hands against his back, moving them in a slow arc over his shoulders. Then, she leaned against him with the heels of her palms, shifting her torso forward a little. Keith felt something hard and cool slip between his legs
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Rachel/Keith - The Consequences of Flirtation - 3/3 - NC-17
anonymous
February 12 2009, 00:28:35 UTC
Then, in one slow push, she was inside him.
Fuck. Just. Fuck.
Keith more groaned than moaned as deep current of both pleasure and pain ran through him. Rachel laughed huskily, dragging her nails down his back.
"Do you like it?" She thrust hard, just once, hitting him deep inside.
He whimpered.
"Do you?" he could hear the cruel smile in her voice. She moved her hips again, slowly, sliding in and out.
"Yes," he choked.
"Do you want me to keep doing this?" Rachel ran her fingers down his back again, this time gently, no nails.
"Yes," he said, more steadily.
Rachel began rocking back and forth, but only slightly, so Keith could just barely feel the movement inside of him. He clutched the bedspread, trying not to move back against her, afraid she might stop. It was driving him crazy. He let out another whimper.
Rachel stilled.
"Damn it," he hissed.
"What's wrong, Keith?" Rachel ran her fingers down his thigh, "What do you want?"
"I want you."
"You want me whatKeith steadied himself, "I want you to fuck me
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Re: Rachel/Keith - The Consequences of Flirtation - 3/3 - NC-17
anonymous
February 12 2009, 00:36:23 UTC
insert here, then, a keyboard smash that translates into OMGDEADOFHOT. guh.
can i tell you, though, my favorite part? this, right here: "Hi," she said, softly. that sudden transformation from dom!rachel to sweet, normal rachel -- i repeat, guh.
in conclusion, rachel needs to fuck keith in the ass more often. holy god. <33
Re: Rachel/Keith - The Consequences of Flirtation - 3/3 - NC-17
anonymous
February 12 2009, 01:50:12 UTC
HOLY HELL THIS IS HOT.
(Um, sorry. I'm better now.)
Between this -- It was so quiet Keith swore he could hear her smile -- and Keith *blushing*, this is the sweetest superhot thing I've read in a long, long time.
OP IS DEAD WITH THE HAPPY x_x <3
anonymous
February 12 2009, 15:05:37 UTC
This is utterly fabulous and perfect, thank you sooooo much! Keith and Rachel's voices are perfect, especially Rachel - the perfect mix of "STFU AND DO WHAT I SAY" and adorable cuteness. I love Keith's confusion and quick obedience, so delicous... Oh yeah, blah blah excellent writing, HAWT HAWT PORN. ::ahem::
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Fuck.
Just.
Fuck.
Keith more groaned than moaned as deep current of both pleasure and pain ran through him. Rachel laughed huskily, dragging her nails down his back.
"Do you like it?" She thrust hard, just once, hitting him deep inside.
He whimpered.
"Do you?" he could hear the cruel smile in her voice. She moved her hips again, slowly, sliding in and out.
"Yes," he choked.
"Do you want me to keep doing this?" Rachel ran her fingers down his back again, this time gently, no nails.
"Yes," he said, more steadily.
Rachel began rocking back and forth, but only slightly, so Keith could just barely feel the movement inside of him. He clutched the bedspread, trying not to move back against her, afraid she might stop. It was driving him crazy. He let out another whimper.
Rachel stilled.
"Damn it," he hissed.
"What's wrong, Keith?" Rachel ran her fingers down his thigh, "What do you want?"
"I want you."
"You want me whatKeith steadied himself, "I want you to fuck me ( ... )
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can i tell you, though, my favorite part? this, right here: "Hi," she said, softly. that sudden transformation from dom!rachel to sweet, normal rachel -- i repeat, guh.
in conclusion, rachel needs to fuck keith in the ass more often. holy god. <33
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Glad you enjoyed. :D
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*Guh*
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Holy hotness.
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O.o
o.O
O.O
FUCK.
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(Um, sorry. I'm better now.)
Between this -- It was so quiet Keith swore he could hear her smile -- and Keith *blushing*, this is the sweetest superhot thing I've read in a long, long time.
♥ ♥ ♥
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o.O THANK YOU XDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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