There and Back Again (2/2)

Dec 14, 2011 20:54

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tzzzz December 15 2011, 02:47:44 UTC
This was great! I love the Sheppard and Todd relationship so much and this really drew out all the elements that I find the most interesting. Thanks for writing.

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everybetty December 21 2011, 03:56:26 UTC
Thanks for the kind words! It was fun playing with Todd and having him be important to the story.

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anonymous December 15 2011, 04:26:13 UTC
I really enjoyed this! Your Todd is so interesting, and I really loved his interactions with Ronon and his take on John. Thanks so much for sharing with all of us!

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kriadydragon December 15 2011, 04:47:36 UTC
FLippin' brilliant! There was so much I loved about this - Sheppard as a runner, Sheppard fighting the wraith he accidentally brings single-handedly, Ronon never giving up, John's trust issues, the twist of the queen being a child, Ronon and Teyla going to Todd for help, john's reaction... love, love, love!

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everybetty December 21 2011, 03:57:44 UTC
Aw, thanks, M. It was a little outside my comfort zone so I'm pleased to hear it worked so well for you!

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lar_laughs December 15 2011, 04:50:16 UTC
That is a most excellent story! Thank you so much for sharing! I'm going to add this to my list of must read agains.

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everybetty December 21 2011, 03:58:11 UTC
Thanks for the kind words, and repeat reads are free :)

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viggofest December 15 2011, 04:50:18 UTC
Spectacular! Loved the pov and the interactions with Todd. Thank you for sharing this with all of us!

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everybetty December 21 2011, 03:59:16 UTC
I'm not the most prolific of writers so it was nice to have a good cause to write for and get something out there. Thanks! I liked writing 'with' Todd, too!

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