Comments | everybetty: Fic- No Matter Where You Go, There You Are (1/2)

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Fic- No Matter Where You Go, There You Are (1/2)

Aug 22, 2011 11:55

Title: No Matter Where You Go, There You Are
Word Count: 10,000-
Rating: T
Genre: Gen
Spoilers/Warnings: Set Post EATG
Summary: John decides that Ronon and Teyla need to see the USA. Their road trip makes an unexpected detour. Whole team plus one.

Written for coolbreeze1 for the sheppard_hc Summer Exchange.

( No Matter Where You Go, There You Are )

Comments 5

coolbreeze1 August 22 2011, 17:54:54 UTC

Oh, this is an awesome start! I love Ronon driving too fast in the snow and Sheppard trying to hit phantom breaks. I can totally picture him doing that! Kansas is definitely NOT the most thrilling country to drive through, especially the western half of the state. I've driven it too many times to count and laughed out loud at that one. I love the idea of a road trip in general though, and then the accident and all the first-responder details were fantastic. Can't wait to read the rest of it!!!

lar_laughs August 23 2011, 04:38:18 UTC

Love it! The details got me into the story and kept me there throughout the whole thing. The team aspect was spot on and lovely to read. I sure hope that John gets well soon! *grins* Great job!

tridget August 25 2011, 02:42:20 UTC

Very compelling. Nice realism in the details. I'll swear I drove around Niagara Falls in the exact same snowstorm a couple of years ago.

So funny that Ronon got to drive and especially that John was doing so much co-driving.

I loved that John was confused about many things but got the type of chopper right.

aim2misbhave November 13 2011, 02:57:53 UTC

This is awesome, I especially liked this cause I'm a Buffalo native so I learned to drive in a storm like that :-)

sidhartinas June 16 2016, 23:43:38 UTC

I know it's been a long time but I swear I have no idea how this great fic scaped to me. Specially because I LOVE medical details so much!!!! I just can't explain how much I enjoyed the rescue by a med team on earth. I have a special liking for John H/C stories ON EARTH. Do not know why but I feel very attracted by. I would love to had had even more medical drama...like him not doing so good at the recovery part or things turning to the worst at the hospital....perhaps sudden.memory lost....selective memory lost....owww.....I just can't have enough whump. Thanks for this talented writing.