FicAlert! PoT> Tone Deaf (Hiyoshi, Ohtori, Shishido) PG

[everlind]

Title: Tone Deaf
Writer: Everlind
Wordcount: 1500
Pairing: None. (Yes, I am shocked, too.)
Rating: PG
Warnings: None.
Summary: Hiyoshi asks a friend to help him.
Disclaimer: The Prince of Tennis belongs to Konomi Takeshi. This story is based on characters and the universe of The Prince of Tennis, no money is being made from it.
Author's Notes: HAPPY

Comments

[oriaon]

Oh my gosh. I had this smile on my face that kept growing and growing and then I made the mistake of trying to stifle my laughter, thinking it'd pass, but then I kept on reading and the whole way through I've got my hands clamped over my mouth trying not to breathe because then I'd have air available to burst out laughing with, and when I finally made it to the end I thought I was going to die xD;;;;;;;;

Hahaha, oh, Hiyoshi dear <3 I know exactly how it is for someone to go "Do it like *this*" and you're just all /: because yeah, great, that was a lot of help, thanks for that. Ootori struggling to find not-so-insulting constructive criticism is just precious, and then comes in Shishido with his brash honesty <3 <3 <3 Taki's suspected panties is where I just about died. Your take on the characters are always so so endearing, I just can't

[everlind]

Late Eve is late and made of fail. I deserve butt-kicking.

BUT! So happy you liked it XD

I'm sorry it simply isn't BETTER, you deserve the best and the most glorious and all things awesome and shiny but I TRIED, I swear.

I know just about jackshit about music so I was just as lost as Hiyoshi was, to be honest XD And then I had to make Ohtori sound knowledgable but he's like friggin' Dumbledore when it comes to music and I'm like... Filch. Yeah.

Still, so damn glad you enjoyed it! And thank you, so so so so so MUCH for the lovely art. It still sits in a folder on my desktop and I look at it every day ♥

[sac527]

Choutarou, you sweetheart.

Piyo!!!!! I love his voice here and the last line killed me. <333

Were the silk panties Atobe's or Taki's?

[everlind]

When I write Ohtori at his most innocent I always sort of wanna ruffle his hair and squish him (although I probably can't reach his hair because I'm Jirou's height XD ... I'll just get a chair).

Taki's of course. We all know Atobe's would be golden leopard print

[amyused]

Hiyoshiiii!!! <3 Gekokujou indeed...

[everlind]

ALWAYS :3

He always gets the best of Shishido XD

[hyakuiro]

I so much loved the portrayal of Shishido being all fuck-it-i'm-being-straight-to-the-point regarding his critique of Hiyoshi's piano-playing. XD
Also, I really liked how we got to see Ohtori and Shishido's relationship through the eyes of a third person, and Hiyoshi is so fun to read as well. Gekokujou indeed!
You totally killed me at the purple underwear XDDDD

[everlind]

Subtlety is a foreign concept to Shishido. I imagine often to the great despair of the rest of the team (but not as bad as Gakuto, he's about three times worse still XD).

I _like_ writing Hiyoshi, but this was a bit weird. Mostly because I, myself, am a complete ignoramus about music so I had to look for every music-related term in this little bastard XD

I had to make an underwear joke. I just can't... I have to. It's a condition I have. Honest.