FicAlert! PoT> In Sickness and in Health (Silver Pair) R

[everlind]

Title: In Sickness and in Health
Writer: Everlind
Wordcount: 3765
Pairing: Silver Pair
Rating: R (for mentions of sex and nudity, but it is really quite tame)
Warnings: Unsexy moments.
Summary: Taking care of your sick partner is part of the job, too.
Disclaimer: The Prince of Tennis belongs to Konomi Takeshi. This story is based on characters and

Comments

[winterwaltz6]

Hi there! I stumbled across your journal somehow and now I'm in HEAVEN. Just pure heaven. So ... I guess that's my way of saying apologies in advance for spamming your inbox with my comments of love and worship. :)

I absolutely adore your writing style and how well you have developed these characters. You really excel at the "show not tell" concept that is so difficult for many writers. You somehow seem to take the smallest of details and turn them into these beautiful moments that show the loveliness of Ohtori's and Shishido's relationship with each other -- but in a nice subtle way that doesn't bash the reader over the head with it. It's quite wonderful.

I have to say that I particularly loved the scene in the bathtub. Especially Ohtori's little joke about the nurse's outfit. Too funny!

Be assured that I will be commenting like mad on your other fics. This just happens to be the first one I've read on my laptop and not my iPhone, thereby making it easier to leave you a comment!

[everlind]

You are most welcome to spam my inbox with comments *shameless eyebrow waggle*
Ahem, actually I mean to be less of an ass and just say: thank you. Very much. It always means a lot to me to see a comment land into my inbox. As much as I enjoy writing the stories for me -myself-, it is obvious I want to share with others too, and knowing they have been enjoyed is a reward unlike any other.

Thank you for the compliments regarding my writing style, even though I realize it is still shaky here and there, not having properly settled. It's very nice to hear that my 'show not tell' worked for you, it is sometimes hard to discern whether the meaning comes through or gets lost between the lines.
Thank you for that :)

I need to point out that my brain and Ohtori's are completely aligned where Shishido and the nurse uniform are concerned.

Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a comment. Truly.

[naszca]

I like this one shot... I really really like it :)
It's so cute and innocent^^
Something that makes you somehow really, really happy just reading it :)
Well ok, don't really know what else I can say^^
I really appreciate your writing style, it's so fluently and natural^^
Well keep on writing?
Greetings, Naszca

[everlind]

Thank you very, very much for the nice comment! Glad it was able to give you a happy boost.

You bet I'll keep on writing ;)

Thank you again!