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The Right Road - Michael/Sara - Chapter Three

Jul 27, 2009 00:06

Title: The Right Road (3/?)
Fandom: Prison Break
Pairing: Michael Scofield/Sara Tancredi
Characters: Michael Scofield, Sara Tancredi, Lincoln Burrows, Veronica Donovan, Frank Tancredi, various original characters
Rating: PG-15
Genre: AU, Non-Epilogue-Compliant, Alternate Reality
Length: 5,873 words
Summary: One single decision can sometimes change ( Read more... )

alternate reality, michael/sara, fanfic, the right road, msgenevieve

Comments 5

tuesdaeschild July 26 2009, 18:10:31 UTC

Their meeting was perfect, sweetheart! Even down to the I'm Michael, by the way!

And I'd pay money to watch those long, elegant fingers folding anything out of a napkin!! Definitely finger!porn!!

This has been a gorgeous story and I've loved that it's beginnings were in canon, even if it's canon we never saw. It's just about one little thing going a slightly different way and everything else turning out to be happy. Those small, apparently insignificant, moments that can change many lives.

It's been a wonderful antidote to some of the suckage of Season 4. Thank you, love! :)

*hugs*

MsGenevieve does it again! britgal July 27 2009, 00:04:49 UTC

Wow I love your writings and this story is no exception!

Thank you so much for your great imagination and brilliantly true characterisation. More please!!

Annette

liss_evenstar July 27 2009, 19:36:44 UTC

*still grining like an idiot*
Well,I have to say how much I love this chapther.First that´s the I´m Michael by the way,then that´s Michael again and citing Shakespeare
*sighs*
And of course that´s napking Cristhmas tree,Sara looking for Michael on the crow,inner-Lincoln,Sara and Michael´s chemistry and the fact that Michael is gonna meet Frank!

Can I aks you a question?Where do you update soon(here,your LJ,Pb.net)?So,I can read this story fast?
*waiting for the next chapter*

The Right Road, chapter 3 roget72 July 31 2009, 14:00:07 UTC

What can I say but thank you! And I hope this isn't the last installment! I loved this one as much as the first two...but it was a form of torture waiting for the second and third parts!

You write so beautifully, with such lovely details that (forgive me) it almost discourages me from writing.

"A face like a fallen angel and a voice like molten silk" describes Michael to a "T". You also captured Sara's elegance and her no-nonsense approach. To think we'll never see those two onscreen together again is almost more than I can bear, but your writing about them is manna from heaven.

sk56 July 31 2009, 16:54:30 UTC

"Would you like to meet my father?"

Now that's a bolt from the blue. She must be really flustered!