Fabulous story! Funny, spot on and damn hot all at once. I love the way they pick at each other. And Derek's inner monologue is hysterical. And did I mention the hawt! Woo hoo.
“They won’t be expecting a nuclear family. Not Sarkissian, not Cromartie, not the FBI.”
She was right. Sarkissian had watched one of them blow up, and the FBI and Cromartie were still looking for the just Connors. It was tactically sound. He still thought it was bullshit. He also liked the way his nose was shaped, so he didn’t bring it up further.
Sporfle! It totally makes sense, and he's totally scared of her. Both those facts are awesome.
Pomegranate St., drinking punch, kitten sweater... That was very fun ride. Very entertaining and totally hot.
Kitten Sweater smiles at him. He knows that smile. It’s a manic crusader of a smile that signals death to whoever gets in the way of its goal. He’s seen it on both of the Connors in various incarnations, but combining it with embroidered animal life and a green thumb is pretty off putting
What a great section.
she comes and comes and comes down.
It takes a while before her shudders stop clenching tightsweet against his fingers, before they subside into aftershocks and she starts to whimper
Thanks! I was trying to figure out where to set this and so I actually pulled out a map of Cali and put my finger down on Woodlake. They have a community website that made all of my research way too much fun.
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Fabulous story! Funny, spot on and damn hot all at once. I love the way they pick at each other. And Derek's inner monologue is hysterical. And did I mention the hawt! Woo hoo.
Thanks so much for posting this.
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She was right. Sarkissian had watched one of them blow up, and the FBI and Cromartie were still looking for the just Connors. It was tactically sound. He still thought it was bullshit. He also liked the way his nose was shaped, so he didn’t bring it up further.
Sporfle! It totally makes sense, and he's totally scared of her. Both those facts are awesome.
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Glad you liked it!
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Kitten Sweater smiles at him. He knows that smile. It’s a manic crusader of a smile that signals death to whoever gets in the way of its goal. He’s seen it on both of the Connors in various incarnations, but combining it with embroidered animal life and a green thumb is pretty off putting
What a great section.
she comes and comes and comes down.
It takes a while before her shudders stop clenching tightsweet against his fingers, before they subside into aftershocks and she starts to whimper
And damn, I think I need to go find Derek. :P
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And damn, I think I need to go find Derek.
Yeah. Don't we all? Thanks!
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