Comments | ever_obsessed: fic: potential (heroes: passage)

ever_obsessed

fic: potential (heroes: passage)

Jul 31, 2010 04:26

elle/claire, r, ~3150
follows discorrupt in the passage series; notes must be read here
Five months and six days between then and now.

( the inherent capacity for coming into being; existing in possibility; electric potential: the difference in electrical charge between two points in a circuit expressed in volts )

fanfiction: heroes, ships: claire/elle, series: passage, fic: oneshot

Comments 11

bellonablack July 31 2010, 06:18:56 UTC

"Before she didn’t really care before but now Elle hates it, feels like they’re all watching her, like they’re all waiting for her to turn her back so they can-

Do something to you, a little voice in her head is sure, but she doesn’t know what the hell that means."

I feel weirdly...validated because I thought--as the voice gets louder--that it would be Adam. Somehow, I thought that'd be true and! It was! and I was all XD. But sad due to the circumstance.

I think you're awesome because you're going to explore what kind of person Elle is, her experiences not just...melting away. I'm glad of that, I'm just glad of that.

And your Claire, as always, is divine. I like how I can trust her. I mean, there is an edge there, but it's like it has to be or it's just her. But she is like a rock, and when she does kind things, or is considerate, it's a really weird relief. (and how do I explain that, I cannot)

...So I'm happy to have read this, this is intensely awesome.

ever_obsessed August 1 2010, 03:36:25 UTC

I think you're awesome because you're going to explore what kind of person Elle is, her experiences not just...melting away. I'm glad of that, I'm just glad of that.
This series = all about Elle and through her the other characters, especially Claire, <3

EVERYTHING WILL MAKE SENSE, I PROMISE.

( ... )

shadowings July 31 2010, 17:18:58 UTC

YES YES YES AN UPDATE!

This piece wasn't as emotionally charged as the rest in the series to me, but I can definitely taste the upcoming storm of the ensuing chapters. So excited!

ever_obsessed August 1 2010, 03:38:42 UTC

I did a lot of rewriting of this piece and the next two pieces in the universe and this was the closest I could get to what I was going for without spoiling the entire damn plot.

Shit will hit the fan but, honestly, it's more than a long time coming, yo, and that kind of stuff?

MAKES MY HEART GO PITTER-PAT, YO, <3

eternal_moonie July 31 2010, 18:47:54 UTC

Absolutely LOVE this!!!!

ever_obsessed August 1 2010, 03:38:59 UTC

\o/

wgail July 31 2010, 22:48:07 UTC

Wow! This was amazing. I sincerely loved it!! I had to go back and read the entire epic series you have written. If only Heroes had been so bold and explored this subject matter. The dynamic between Elle and Claire is fascinating and I'm still putting the puzzle pieces together in my mind. I love your writing style and story content. I'm so glad to have found this fic! I really look forward to more.

ever_obsessed August 1 2010, 03:56:29 UTC

Thanks so much.

And, yeah, there are certain concepts and subject matter that repeatedly pops up in my stuff - and this series is really a lot of that stuff rolled all together into one universe. So. Yeah. I'm going into all of this with the express purpose of seeing the most horrible parts of this universe just to... explore the characters and their growth through all of that shit, if that makes any sense.

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ever_obsessed September 8 2010, 05:56:34 UTC

Thanks, \o/