fic: passage (2/10) (elle/claire)

Sep 29, 2008 00:42

Title: Passage (2/10)
Rating: NC-17 (language, disturbing imagery, graphic sex)
Pairing: Elle/Claire; side Adam/Elle, Adam/Claire
Timeline: Post-“ So
Prompt: “depression” at 10_themes
Disclaimer: Not mine, just playing with them
Teaser: Ten stages between one thing and the next, between lust and love.

maybe claire will miss her )

heroes: passage

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sinandmisery September 29 2008, 05:36:37 UTC
ok, i'm seriously insanely jealous of the way you can write them. it's so complex yet written in such simple words and god, i love it. your elle is so frakked up and human and gorgeous and the way she longs for someone to treat her like another human makes my heart hurt and then there's poor, gorgeous, frakked up claire and all her humanities studies and yet she can't manage to apply anything she's supposedly learning. i really can't wait for more of this!

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 20:43:08 UTC
You totally just made my day, babe.

Like, seriously, ♥

I'm glad people are picking up on Claire's side of things because it's not her story but they're both being put through through the wringer, you know?

And both of them are severely frakked up right now.

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slavefaith September 29 2008, 06:42:37 UTC
..... my heart is in pieces for elle right now...

egad, more!

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 04:39:34 UTC
Elle don't have easy.

But then, I'm never easy on my favorites, *g*

Thanks for the feedback, =)

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slavefaith September 30 2008, 10:50:25 UTC
I was saying to someone else...

Elle/Claire is my new Faith/Buffy

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 18:48:18 UTC
Dude, it's very true - they both have that ability to pretty much channel any kind of emotion in a fic and they have the needier, darker aspects at their heart that color everything else.

So it's fun, heh.

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eternal_moonie September 29 2008, 10:30:40 UTC
I love it! Cannot wait to read more!

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 04:36:41 UTC
Thanks!

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joeyseph September 29 2008, 16:32:39 UTC
i am really fealing sorry for elle right now.. claire is less of a bitch, thank gawd, but still...

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 04:35:34 UTC
Heh, yes.

Thanks!

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motylik September 29 2008, 17:41:27 UTC
Poor Elle. You manage to convey how confused she is because she doesn't really know what she wants but how depressed she is by knowing whatever it is it's not something she's getting. *sighs* And Claire is even more insane than Elle in this. I hope she comes back to the living soon. Can't wait for more!

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 08:40:03 UTC
Claire is extremely fucked-up right now, and Elle is bearing the brunt of it in a whole lot of ways - which is coming at a horrible time because Elle is trying to figure out who the hell she is.

So, yeah, it's all... messy.

Thanks - I always get a little squeak of glee when I see your name on a review, *g*

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motylik September 30 2008, 18:35:38 UTC
Yeah, it's really sad, but I'm a sucker for angst so I'm loving it. :D

Why? You just really surprised me. :D (Made me day just a bit brighter today too)

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ever_obsessed September 30 2008, 22:54:54 UTC
You're talking to someone who thinks writing angst is the funnest thing ever - because the best way to really get into a character is by stabbing them in the metaphorical heart and seeing how they survive it, *g*

But I love them so it does have a reason, I swear.

And I've started to see you as a regular for my Elle fic, which is nice. There's not nearly enough love for my little crazy walking taser in fandom so seeing you makes me :D and do a little dance in my chair like a big old geek.

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