fic: lost and found again (matt/mohinder)

[ever_obsessed]

Title: Lost And Found Again
Rating: PG-13 (vague sexuality)
Pairing: Matt/Mohinder
Spoilers: Only through mid-S2 (think Maury and Elle) and AU beyond that.
Disclaimer: Heroes belongs to NBC and Tim Kring and since I’m neither, I clearly do not own it. This was written by a fan of the show who really likes these characters and really likes poking them

Comments

[tiptoe39]

loved it. so hard to do an adult communication fic, the risk of porn or waff is everpresent. and you manage to keep it on the straight 'n' narrow. Well, ok, on the narrow. :D

Thanks for sharing it with us.

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks, =)

This thing kept turning into porn on me and I was getting really annoyed about it. I wanted there to be communication but I didn't want it to be perfect - Matt's getting over a marriage and Mohinder's got his own issues and Molly lost her parents to the guy who killed Mo's daddy.

As much as I fully see them falling naturally into a life together, I see a few big hurdles taking a while to get over.

*pets your icon*

*coughs and looks down guiltily*

[tiptoe39]

My icon pets you back.

Heavy petting, mind you. :P

(I write the WAFF that makes it possible for grown-ups like you to roll their eyes do their job. Thanks for raising the collective IQ of this fandom.)

[zvi_likes_tv]

That was my prompt and I am really quite chuffed that you were able to do something so thoughtful with it. I really liked this story, and I liked that you got both their viewpoints across really rationally.

[ever_obsessed]

It's an awesome prompt and I loved poking it to see what it would say to me - plus, I think you may have finally given me an idea for that multi-chapter Matt/Mohinder fic I haven't been able to cement in my brain.

Which makes you made of win.

I wanted them both to sound rationale in their sides of it, so, yay, I did it!

*victory arms*

[out_there]

Oh, that was lovely. I especially enjoyed:

“Want to know a secret?” Matt whispered against his mouth a long minute later, breathless but grinning.

“What?”

“I can read minds.”

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks!

I was hoping that would take the edge off the not!happy aspects here, *g*

[boudecia7]

Ooh! Good stuff! I love how real and thoughtful the narrative was, without ever being overdramatic. Nicely done, and very sweet at the end :D

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks!

Wanted it to be realistic without being overdone.

Fic: Lost and Found Again

[secondsilk]

Oh, I am becoming such a fan of M3 fic. I haven't gotten to see any of season two yet, but it's lovely to have them all together. The issues each of them has, and then the issues of communication between them all play out deftly. I like Mohinder trying to hide his thoughts, and worrying about what he'll give away, and then Matt's joke about it at the end, because that really as much an issue for them as any other navigating the outside world.
Lovely.

Re: Fic: Lost and Found Again

[ever_obsessed]

Thanks so much - I love the complications that Matt's power adds to everything else, sort of sharpens all of their other issues along the way.