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s11235 February 27 2011, 21:01:28 UTC
That was PERFECT! The characterisation was spot on and the sequence of events was so realistic. Particularly loved the irony of the last line. I feel so sorry for Caroline, first her mum rejected for being a vamp and now Matt. Elena initially freaked out about Stefan but then she accepted him- don't see that happening with Matt and Caroline. That's what makes me have hope for Forwood. Absolutely loved this and can't wait for the next chapter :)

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kellou24 February 27 2011, 22:15:36 UTC
Are you trying to make me cry??? Poor Caroline...

Can't wait for more;D

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silviakundera February 27 2011, 22:19:01 UTC
Aww, Caroline! I have to admit, I hope she compels him on the show as well.

I'm intrigued to see where this is going. Looks promising.

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burstoflight February 27 2011, 22:32:36 UTC
Wow this was amazing Iz! I wish you were a writer on the show. I honestly don't see how Matt would be able to accept hanging with Vicki's killers or be okay with the fact that Caroline herself has killed people. Not to mention there's this whole supernatural world going on in Mystic Falls right under his nose. Either Matt's gonna die on the show or he'll be compelled by the end of the season...or partially compelled.

Anyway, keep up the great work! :)

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goshgollyg February 27 2011, 23:49:59 UTC
Wow, that was so good! Can't wait to see where you take this! Now have something to read til the writers bring Tyler back, yay!

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