Fanfiction: Hidden Hope (Remus Lupin, PG-13)

[evening12]

Title: Hidden Hope
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Comments

[icicle33]

This was so lovely when I read it and is still lovely now. You painted such a strong picture with so few words, which is something difficult to do, especially for someone like me that just rambles on and on forever. I enjoyed how you described Remus' inner turmoil about the storm and also about the hope and rainbow that will follow. Beautiful job. Now, you just need to write longer pieces! ♥ ♥ ♥

[evening12]

Aww, thanks for the comment. It makes me feel all warm inside :)

[amorette]

This is intriguing! I like it!

[evening12]

Thank you!

[yeaka]

I enjoy the powerful imagery here. The brevity speaks volumes. Your Remus introspective pieces are touching. There's definitely a signature to your work; they're like particularly coherent and concise stream of consciousness pieces. They keep making me want more, though. XD I also like how this mentions his parents waiting for him; it's an unusual timeline pick for Remus - I don't often see pre-Hogwarts Remus fics. This may be me reading too much into it, but there's also an ambiguity here as to whether his blunt storm descriptions are of a literal storm or the metaphorical storm in himself. I want you to now write a fic where Remus finds his rainbow. <3

[evening12]

*flail* I can't believe you've read as many of my fics as you have. You must have read them after I went to bed :D I absolutely adore Remus so any time in the timeline is fair game for me. Thanks for reading!