Comments | even_angels_: Challenge 4, Prompt 3

seftiri in even_angels_

Challenge 4, Prompt 3

Mar 01, 2006 20:56

Title: I Fall
Author: Erin M. Hoagland
Fandom: None (this one's personal)
Challenge: Challenge 4, Prompt 3
Words: 352

( I Fall )

challenge four, challenge four prompt three

Comments 7

fewthistle March 2 2006, 03:06:06 UTC

Oh.My.Lord. Erin, dear, that is simply beautiful. So completely heartfelt, such gorgeous imagery. Wow. Just wow.

seftiri March 2 2006, 03:20:43 UTC

Thank you...

I haven't been able to stop thinking of her at all today. Can you tell? ;)

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seftiri March 2 2006, 03:23:59 UTC

Thank you.

The prompt was perfect for my mood today, so thank you for providing it. :)

omiceti March 2 2006, 03:57:11 UTC

I read this earlier, but I didn't have time to do it justice before I had to run out. Now I'm back, and I find that it's not time I'm lacking, but the words to tell you how great this is: how lovely and how wildly expansive, almost spinning out of control, falling back on the truth of one thing. It's really, really gorgeous writing. Just beautiful. And I'm sorry I can't come up with more precise things to say about it.

seftiri March 2 2006, 04:13:20 UTC

almost spinning out of control, falling back on the truth of one thing

That's exactly the emotion I was trying to convey in this piece. :)

Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it more than I can say.

godessillyria March 2 2006, 21:37:14 UTC

You most certainly capture the rapture and depth of the emotions you so eloquently have written down for our reading pleasure.

I feel priviledged to have read this lovely piece.

Thank you.

seftiri March 2 2006, 22:12:28 UTC

Thank you for your lovely feedback...

It was my pleasure to write it and to share it here. :)