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The Forgotten: Chapter 9

Nov 21, 2012 13:26

“Richard!” Kahlan screams as I lunge with both agiels in hand at the creature. It screams and drops Richard, as he gasps for breathe. Kahlan and Roland pull him from the creature as I continue to swing my agiels at it.

“Cara! Move!” Zedd yells. I jump away as the wizard’s fire goes over my head. The creature screams and stops moving when the fire ( Read more... )

legend of the seeker, the forgotten, cara

Comments 4

laurilee59 November 21 2012, 21:04:17 UTC

Holy Crap!!! What are doing to Richard? You are going to slowly torture us aren't you Ms. Evie?

I love how your showing Cara's thoughts and her secret desire to throw R/K into a room for safe keeping.

I Love the banter as well:

"Something wrong?” I ask her.

“Just tired,” she gives me a weary smile. She is a terrible liar.

“Liar,” I call her out on it.

“Not bad for not being a confessor,” she smirks.
I hear footsteps come up behind me and see Roland. I roll my eyes.

“Hi,” he catches up with me.

“Yes?” I ask.

“I just wanted to see how you were doing,” he smiles that damn smile at me.

“Peachy,” I respond sarcastically.

“Ah,” he laughs. “I forget you do not like talking about feelings and such.”

“Well you certainly are observant,” I smirk.

“I have my moments,” he winks.

“Do you now?” I raise an eyebrow at him.

“So I have been told,” he tells me.

“I will let you know when I see one of those moments,” I respond.

Well done, the wait was worth it!!! Now hurry up and get the next chapter written. Great Job bb!!

evelyngrace87 November 22 2012, 03:35:30 UTC

So glad you like it, sister! I still get so nervous when posting!

Yeah, Richard may be in some trouble! Who better to save him than Cara?!

Thanks SO much for reading!!! <3

lotslovercss November 22 2012, 03:51:27 UTC

AGH!! What an update!!

Such a suspenseful chapter! Poor Richard and Kahlan and now Cara and Roland have to try and steal the book to save the Seeker!

“He is Lord Rahl. Lots of things should have killed him. Yet he breathes,” I remind her.

LOVE that line!!

Richard walks back over to us. He sits next to Kahlan and wraps an arm around her. She leans into his embrace and closes her eyes. Fear sweeps through me thinking about anything happening to either of them.

That too made me squee!!

Great update, bb! :)

evelyngrace87 November 22 2012, 18:01:01 UTC

Thanks so much for reading, bb! Yes, poor Richee is in some trouble!

Cara has some good one liners doesn't she?! ;P

Thanks agian for reading and commenting!