Smolder Lane Part IX

Sep 29, 2012 19:05

mso-ansi-language:EN">Thank you for the whipped cream and strawberries ;) .

Evie giggles, causing Brendan to stir.

“I hope that is not Christian Grey,” he teases.

“I think Mr. Grey would be impressed with what Mr. Fraser did last night,” Evie smiles and leans in for a kiss. This time Brendan’s phone buzzes. He raises an eyebrow and looks at his phone ( Read more... )

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laurilee59 September 30 2012, 07:45:32 UTC
Oh Bret and Taylor bonded after their dance how sweet is that. Mr. Grey making Jlyn and Evie swoon. No swooning in front of hubbies they get jealous. Oh God I pray Taylor has not found his way to the lake. John can't go to jail she needs her honeymoon time.

Shame on you Evident you left us hanging!!!

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evelyngrace87 September 30 2012, 17:44:52 UTC
IKR? They got into the champagne! And somehow ended up pantless! Say what?!

Just who do Jlyn and I meet at the lake?! Oh boy!

Thanks for reading!! *HUGS*

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laurilee59 September 30 2012, 18:01:31 UTC
I love how my kindle changed the spelling of Jlyn and Evie after I hit send.

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lotslovercss October 2 2012, 02:08:40 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHA!!!! THAT IS HILAROUS!!! I couldn't stop laughing at this update!!

LOVED THIS --->
LOTSLove wishes there would be an eclipse or something right now. She was curled up with her Craig, but the sun was protesting the day came. She moaned and snuggled tighter to him.

“Tired still?” Craig murmured.

“I wonder why,” LOTSLove giggled.

“I have not the faintest idea,” Craig smiled and kissed his wife. LOTSLove then heard her phone go off. She furrowed her brow and reached for her phone. It was from Evie.

It gave me goosebumps!!! I was all melting inside at the very thought! *sigh*

<>AND THIS:
“My hair!” Taylor cried and followed Bret.

ROFL!! LOVED THAT LINE. Dumb dog! :D

Great update, bb! Can't wait for more!

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evelyngrace87 October 2 2012, 13:37:12 UTC
YAY! I am SO glad it made you laugh!! ;D I really love writing this! It was a blast writing us all waking up with our men! Except for poor Jlyn! Darn it Tay and Bret!!

Thanks so much for reading!! I am excited for the next update too! Several people make appearances!! ;D

*HUGS*

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jlyncss October 2 2012, 17:47:49 UTC

*GRINNING* LOL I love this whole opener! Well, I love the entire story but this opening was especially fabulous!!

“I think Mr. Grey would be impressed with what Mr. Fraser did last night,” Evie smiles and leans in for a kiss. This time Brendan’s phone buzzes. He raises an eyebrow and looks at his phone. Oh really??! ;) LMAO!! Lucky EVIE!! Oh, and thank you for the Strawberries and whipped cream!!

Evie sighs as her and Brendan get up to go help the Pattinsons. *sigh* LOVE the sound of that! ;)

And Lotsy wishing for an “Eclipse” Ahahaha!!! Cute tie in!!

Taylor was ruining her morning with Craig. She sighed and went to go find some proper clothing. Um….he’s ruining EVERYONE’S morning!! And it’s my honeymoon morning!!! KILL THE DOG!! Where is Destiny!!!???

Glad Sister Caroline is in on the action too! We need everyone to rectify this situation ASAP!! lol :D

Thank God for underwear!! I was REALLY worried for a minute there!!

Nice lawn ornaments!” Evie exclaimed. ROFL!!!

“Your husband is awesome!” Jlyn said ( ... )

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evelyngrace87 October 2 2012, 21:50:37 UTC
YAAAAYYYY!! So glad you liked it!! :D Hee hee!! The opening scenese were the best!! Minus your discovery on your front lawn! Damn it, Tay!!!

So glad you like the CG scene! He may be reappearing!!!

HAHAHA drunken pantless boys!! LMAO!!

Update soon!!

*HUG*

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