The Forgotten: Chapter 4

[evelyngrace87]

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I am anxious as we reach the library where Richard and Zedd sit, staring at the books in front of them. I cannot read their expressions well. Not a good sign.

“Close the door as you leave,” Richard instructs the general, who bows and leaves us four in the library.

“What did you find?” Kahlan asks him calmly. I want to scream the question at him. I

Comments

[jlyncss]

I'm glad you're continuing with this story. I've really enjoyed it and am anxious to see where you take it.

You write from Cara's POV very well.

Love that you've brought in Zedd using the clouds.

It's been quiet without you!

[evelyngrace87]

Thanks so much, sister! It has been a very hard few weeks, and I almost gave in but some certina ladies would not let me :)

I am definitely having fun writing from Cara's POV! I have a few other things up my sleeve, hoping everyone likes it:)

[lotslovercss]

WHOA!! What an intense update!!

Poor Cara! I just want to hug her and tell her it will be okay! She's about ready to lose it and things are just getting going!

It's not going to be good if Shota and Darken Rahl get involved in this in any way.

Can't wait for more, bb! Keep up the great writing! :)

[evelyngrace87]

Thank you, bb! <3

I know...I feel bad for Cara and everything just got started! EEP!

Thanks so much for everything!! XOXOXO

[laurilee59]

I think you did an amazing job filling in the back story. You nailed Cara's personality so well. I'm also loving how you are developing her concern for her niece. As always great job!!! <333

[evelyngrace87]

Awwww thank you, Laurilee!!!

I think Cara is starting feel motherly feelings for her niece...in her own Cara way.