OMG!!! This was the funnies one yet. It had me laughing so hard it brought tears to my eyes. I love love love the DJ. I want to hire him at the next party I have. Then the appearance of Destiny from “Whack a Jack” was absolutely hysterical. My absolute favorite lines “I Prefer Expunged” & “Please keep your particles away from my dance floor,” I think the burning question is “Who the Hell Hired Destiny?”
“Destiny’s the name,” the woman told them softly. They had to strain to hear her, like she was telling them a secret. “Dog removal is my game.” She handed Jlyn a card. Evie leaned in to read it.
You had me laughing my ass off! Marco, Polo!!! Poor Jlyn getting all wet thanks to that dog!
Taylor is a one man wrecking machine...can't wait to see if he took out the cake and those standing in his path! LOL
“I didn’t mean to,” Taylor threw his hands up and backed up to the edge of the pool. Bret saw this as an opportunity and played Splish Splash I was Taking A Bath.
I was laughing so hard at Brett playing that song!! He comes up with the most appropriate music! LOL!!
“Oh no,” LOTSLove shook her head and looked at Craig. He was grinning and took her hand and pulled her into the pool with him.
Yah, Craig can do whatever he wants with me whenever he wants to!! *GUH!* *imagines him all wet and muscly*
“Houston! We have a problem!” Brendan said aloud. Evie and LOTSLove turned to see Taylor sliding toward the two couples, ready to take them and the cake down. Brendan and Craig ran towards Taylor, intent on stopping him
“I can’t watch!” LOTSLove grabbed Evie’s arm and they both held their breath, hoping their husbands could stop him in time…..This is going to be awesome!! Jlyn is going to find Destiny's extermination card and track her down to take out Taylor
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HAHAHA...your icon is how I imagine Craig's face when he sees Taylor sliding towards the cake!! LMAO!
I figured you would not mind if Craig pulled you into the pool! Too bad he was not the one to loose his pants *wink*! I promise more kissing for you and Craig in the next update! ;)
I am curious to see what Jlyn will do! I ripped the card up pretty good but, you never know....
IKR?! I LOVE that look on his face! He looks so inquisitive and curious, concerned and yet unsure. *GAH!* I SO WANT TO KISS HIM FOR REALS!!!!!! <33333333333
Jlyn is going to FLIP OUT!! I can't wait to read it!! LOL!!
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Have you ever seen someone slashed to death with the edge of a CD?
LOL but loving the story Evie. Sorry it took so long to get this reply posted. Keep it up girl.
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Oh my! Are you threatening to kill Taylor with a CD?!
Thanks for reading, sir!!! :D
P.S. Started my first chapter LOTS fic!! EEK!!
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Isn't the DJ a riot?! And Balthore thought I would not do him justice!
And yes who did hire Destiny....hmmmmmmmm....
Thanks for always reading! Makes my day!! <3
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You had me laughing my ass off! Marco, Polo!!! Poor Jlyn getting all wet thanks to that dog!
Taylor is a one man wrecking machine...can't wait to see if he took out the cake and those standing in his path! LOL
Great chapter girl!! xx
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I was giggling too over the Marco/Polo incident! Perfect escape for the couples though!!
Thanks for reading, sister!!! <3
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This was hilarious!! Where do I even begin???
“I didn’t mean to,” Taylor threw his hands up and backed up to the edge of the pool. Bret saw this as an opportunity and played Splish Splash I was Taking A Bath.
I was laughing so hard at Brett playing that song!! He comes up with the most appropriate music! LOL!!
“Oh no,” LOTSLove shook her head and looked at Craig. He was grinning and took her hand and pulled her into the pool with him.
Yah, Craig can do whatever he wants with me whenever he wants to!! *GUH!* *imagines him all wet and muscly*
“Houston! We have a problem!” Brendan said aloud. Evie and LOTSLove turned to see Taylor sliding toward the two couples, ready to take them and the cake down. Brendan and Craig ran towards Taylor, intent on stopping him
“I can’t watch!” LOTSLove grabbed Evie’s arm and they both held their breath, hoping their husbands could stop him in time…..This is going to be awesome!! Jlyn is going to find Destiny's extermination card and track her down to take out Taylor ( ... )
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I figured you would not mind if Craig pulled you into the pool! Too bad he was not the one to loose his pants *wink*! I promise more kissing for you and Craig in the next update! ;)
I am curious to see what Jlyn will do! I ripped the card up pretty good but, you never know....
Thanks for reading, sister!!! <33333
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Jlyn is going to FLIP OUT!! I can't wait to read it!! LOL!!
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