Comments | evehs_lullaby: FIC: Incineration

evehs_lullaby

FIC: Incineration - Embers Drive Series

Jul 24, 2009 01:39

( Incineration )

Comments 16

jintymac July 24 2009, 09:17:22 UTC

Wow, this is very powerful writing. Andy has put herself into such a difficult position with Miranda and Emily, what the hell will she do next?

Thanks for another story in this ongoing series, I really love your writing ;-)

evehs_lullaby July 25 2009, 05:13:22 UTC

What will she do next? That is the question isn't it? I'm not sure even I know that yet. ;)

Thank you so much for your comments. They always mean a lot.

seelyfey July 24 2009, 10:47:34 UTC

I really wish I could be angry at Andy right now (what with her messing up a FINALLY working arrangement), but you write her in such a way that I simply can't be. Ugh. Terrible. :)

evehs_lullaby July 25 2009, 05:15:29 UTC

I even have Andy admitting that she's being an ass, so anger might be appropriate :). Thanks so much for your continued comments. They are lovely to read.

pugglez July 24 2009, 20:45:31 UTC

Very powerful chapter. The way you describe Andy's inner struggle is so powerful, intense and very real.

This is by far my fav chapter in this series - it's brilliant!

evehs_lullaby July 25 2009, 05:17:13 UTC

Each new part seems to earn my label as favorite. I'll admit that I had a hard time writing this particular one, but luckily it doesn't seem to have turned out badly.

Thanks for your comments. They are much appreciated.

perks123 July 24 2009, 23:24:48 UTC

An incredible chapter...sad, intense. No one will come out of this unscathe. You are an incredibly gifted writer.

Thank you for sharing.

evehs_lullaby July 25 2009, 05:18:13 UTC

I agree with you, with the no one coming out of it unscathed.

Thanks for reading and for your comments.

melanacious July 25 2009, 02:34:30 UTC

Here's my theory ( ... )

evehs_lullaby July 25 2009, 05:33:12 UTC

Theories are... good. Obviously, I can't admit one way or another whether your theory actually holds merit but I think you've put a lot of thought into it and your hypothesis may not be completely unfounded.

I see no snark or criticism in your words. Though, if you felt like being critical, I wouldn't hold it against you. Andy's got issues. They've all got issues.

Once again, thank you so much for your comments and for voicing your interest in the story and in the characters.