Is to have such an emotional investment in fictional characters that even when you are looking forward to the next peek into their lives, you find yourself experiencing trepidation, and a little panic at what that peek might bring. And began reading like watching an intense scene in a movie with covered eyes, fingers spread just enough to give you a squinted look.
LOL, Darlin' I never know exactly what to expect from you and that is beyond gorgeous.
Thank you. Hopefully, the surprises keep coming though at a lower intensity. Though, from working on the next installment, I make no promises that it will be any less intense. I will admit that no one dies. So, that's good :-)
"Hopefully, the surprises keep coming though at a lower intensity. Though, from working on the next installment, I make no promises that it will be any less intense"
That's almost like saying oh well don't worry... but you might need to worry LOL.
And yeah so glad no one dies, just a couple of heart 'stomping' might be in store but it's all good. LOL I look forward to the update.
LOL. Okay you make a fair and valid point. 'heart stomping' actually might occur, but without death. I'm looking towards the positives, because believe it or not (and I can understand not) but I'm not as dire as my writing would lead one to believe.
I am still working on the next installment, but have hit a bit of a snag. I'm sure I'll work it out. :-)
Your style draws out so many emotions in me. I can't bear the pain and anguish, yet, I feel it would be a crime not to have your beautiful imagery and passion in my life.
To say that I am invested is an understatement...
I feel like we have turned a corner... Who knew it would be on Emily's terms. I find myself beginning to deeply dislike Andy. I want her to learn her lesson, but Im so deeply afraid of what will happen if and when Miranda finds out.
They say it takes two to tango. But Ive taken sides...
Well done bb! Another excellent addition to the series, if not my favourite so far.
Thanks. I do think there needs to be a break in the pain and anguish, however. It's depressing to write.
I completely agree with you. A corner has definitely been turned. But, I do feel like I've put Andy at a disadvantage since I haven't given her a strong voice in the last few installments. I'm changing that a little bit in the next piece. Hopefully.
Another wonderful chapter. Emily has made wise choices. Andy, well, I just don't know. Once again you drew me into your story and made your characters so life like that I care about them.
That was gorgeous and unexpected and I'm inexplicably GLAD for Emily to have had this sudden epiphany. There was something...dangerous lurking in the air right before Emily walked away. The tension was beautiful and I absolutely loved it.
Thank you. I always thought Emily had a greater sense of self than Andy did, but I'm just basing that on the movie which I'm not even sure you can say my characters are close to anymore. Thanks as always for your input.
That last paragraph was awesomely heartbreaking. I love it, it's great the way you write the emotions on each character, specially Emily on this one. I really can't wait for next update :)
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Is to have such an emotional investment in fictional characters that even when you are looking forward to the next peek into their lives, you find yourself experiencing trepidation, and a little panic at what that peek might bring. And began reading like watching an intense scene in a movie with covered eyes, fingers spread just enough to give you a squinted look.
LOL, Darlin' I never know exactly what to expect from you and that is beyond gorgeous.
Beautiful update.
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That's almost like saying oh well don't worry... but you might need to worry LOL.
And yeah so glad no one dies, just a couple of heart 'stomping' might be in store but it's all good. LOL I look forward to the update.
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I am still working on the next installment, but have hit a bit of a snag. I'm sure I'll work it out. :-)
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To say that I am invested is an understatement...
I feel like we have turned a corner... Who knew it would be on Emily's terms. I find myself beginning to deeply dislike Andy. I want her to learn her lesson, but Im so deeply afraid of what will happen if and when Miranda finds out.
They say it takes two to tango. But Ive taken sides...
Well done bb! Another excellent addition to the series, if not my favourite so far.
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I completely agree with you. A corner has definitely been turned. But, I do feel like I've put Andy at a disadvantage since I haven't given her a strong voice in the last few installments. I'm changing that a little bit in the next piece. Hopefully.
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