SPN fic: The Downhill Path

Jun 02, 2009 21:03

Title: The Downhill Path
Author: Eustacia Vye
Author's e-mail: eustacia_vye28@hotmail.com
Disclaimer: Eric Kripke owns the cute boys, and I'm just borrowing them to play.
Rating: NC-17 for explicit language and dirtybadwrong!sex.
Pairing: Oh so dirtybadwrong Sam/Jess.
Warnings: This is AU from the teaser in the Pilot episode. It still ( Read more... )

rating: nc-17, pairing: sam/jess, fanfic: supernatural

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heyurs June 4 2009, 15:29:48 UTC


OK. I'm in the middle of this and just had to say...WHOA! :O!

I had never seen this show until last week. I know, I know, I live in the dark ages. I'm going to have to go back to the beginning, though, to get the whole what the hell is going on thing. I should have known you would draw me in, though... *g*

Back to reading!

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heyurs June 4 2009, 16:46:14 UTC


Ohmygoodness! Dark. Deep. Great storyteller you are! xD

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eustacia_vye28 June 4 2009, 18:09:50 UTC
I'm only in the middle of season 2 myself. But it's cute boys and monsters, so you can't go wrong with that, right? :)

As for the fic... I completely blame the pregnancy hormones. Didn't you see the author's note? ;)

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heyurs June 4 2009, 21:35:07 UTC


hehe! I saw the author's note...*g*

Did you go buy them or are you downloading them from somewhere?

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eustacia_vye28 June 4 2009, 22:41:23 UTC
Mmmm! Cookies! Nom nom nom! :D

Thank you so much for the comment! I really do think that the ending is so much better this way, and it's that much creepier than it had been originally. I'm glad it works!

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sothereyougo June 8 2009, 17:55:05 UTC
This was wicked hot and a very intriguing AU. Normally I avoid wincest (not being judgmental I promise, just not my thing usually), but I couldn't resist the Sam/Jess, which also let me hand-wave the wincest a little and think of Jess as a sort of changeling child brought about by the Crossroads Demon. Your porn-fu is addictive I must say, but I'm also fascinated by the idea that the Crossroads Demon caused Jess to become the embodiment of everything Sam needs and wants and loves in a woman, taking the canon idea of Jess as being Sam's first love and the woman he planned to marry and then twisting it into a demon creating her for him to lead to the conception of their child as the due for John's deal (although you don't say specifically which one the demon is going to take, the idea still works because all three are directly connected to the deal no matter which one the demon takes ( ... )

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eustacia_vye28 June 9 2009, 00:05:33 UTC
Your icon? *loves*

I'm not much into wincest myself. I blame the pregnancy hormones for this little twisted romp into that category. ;)

I absolutely wanted Jess to be this changeling child, and that she's not right in the head. Or right, period. She has this magnetism around her so that no one really notices the weird desperation in her, which may or may not be demonic. :)

The lamer original ending did have the demon take the newborn over the family's protests, with Dean forcing an amulet onto the demon that would keep her from harming the baby. But it fell flat overall, and didn't keep with the creepy feel I was trying to get with the story.

And I'm glad you like the hawt. :D

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sothereyougo June 9 2009, 00:33:14 UTC
Hello again! Just a quick note to say I'm glad that I did get what you were going for in your fic - the changling/oddness factor of Jess, that she was almost a "glamour" of a girl in the witchcraft sense. I love it when people understand what I'm trying to do with a fic. :D

The other reason I dropped back by was to give credit where it is so very surely due for my icon. It is by janglyjewels.livejournal.com, and she does amazing icons. The one you liked :) and this one are from a set she did of that Jared Padalecki TV Guide photo shoot that is actually a year or two old but that they only released the rest of the photos from this year I think. Anyway, if you like these two, I completely recommend her for icon shopping. She is one of the best!!

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eustacia_vye28 June 9 2009, 12:44:32 UTC
OOH! Thanks for the rec. I'll definitely stop by and peruse icons. :)

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i_am_negotiable December 13 2009, 06:10:21 UTC
Found this today - it's one of those stories that so successfully blends rich plot with heavy adult themes. Great job!

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eustacia_vye28 December 14 2009, 13:39:56 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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