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eunhaesaranghae

Hyuk!Top

Jul 13, 2010 23:43

Title: Hyuk!Top (continuation from secret kiss)
Length: One shot (I'm a one shot lover)
Rating: NC-17
Genre: SMUT
Pairing: EUNHAE
Disclaimer: Don't own the boys, only the storyline :(

A/N: Since Hyuk won the comments thing by 1, the Hyuk top story shall go up first hehehehe :) Smut part at the end, if you can't wait, just scroll down until you see ( Read more... )

one shot, eunhae

Comments 34

oh hell yeah!!! hyukhae4ever July 13 2010, 15:47:49 UTC

spot!

Re: oh hell yeah!!! hyukhae4ever July 13 2010, 16:34:09 UTC

weeeeeeee.....
top!Hyuk is winning... kekekeke...
*this is my bias speaking*

ugh, Donghae!
how dare you backed out?!
glad that Hyukjae is persistent enough.... :D

oh my.. two virgins on the game...
okay, that's really pervy of me
hahahahaha...
glad that they are the first for each other :DDDDDDDDDD

Re: oh hell yeah!!! eunhaesaranghae July 14 2010, 14:59:47 UTC

HAHAHAHAHAA your comment is so amusing hehehe! Yes i am glad too! :) :) :) Thank you so much for reading and commenting! <333

dbsj0001 July 13 2010, 15:54:12 UTC

awww~ i was really hoping hae would win *pouts*
oh well~ this was still an awesome part2!!xP
eunhae is sooo naughty~ they're probably one of the reasons why they're dongsaengs can't keep their innocence~ ;P

eunhaesaranghae July 14 2010, 15:00:36 UTC

HAHAHA i'm still writing the smut for Hae!top :( Please wait awhile more thank youuuuu <3 yay hahahaha funnyyy :) Thank you for reading and commenting! :)

SPOT, i guess ime_ime_ime July 13 2010, 15:59:13 UTC

i'll be back *wink*

Re: SPOT, i guess ime_ime_ime July 14 2010, 11:34:20 UTC

i didn't expect...um...the smut...short...but it's okay :D the hotness make up for it ^.^

Re: SPOT, i guess eunhaesaranghae July 14 2010, 15:01:16 UTC

HAHA yeah i thought the smut was pretty short too :( Hahaha i'll work harder don't worry :) thank you for reading and commenting! <3

dizzchan July 13 2010, 17:11:55 UTC

Finallyy.. Hyukkiee.. *crying cos happiness*
Hyukiiee.. Finallyy u can feel how to be TOP!!
Yayyy!! *hae.. Just give him little have fun to feel inside u kay.. XD*

Skip my comment before.. I'm sorry.. my perv mind too excited XD XD

Hae.. Ahh.. How can u so meanniee to hyuukk.. U can't just back away from hyuukk..

Poor hyukk.. But.. It's worth it right.. Cause.. If hae not hiding from hae..

Maybe.. That scene never appear so early.. LOL XD

Keep fightiiingg for next fic..

Can't wait for ur next fic!! <3 <3 <3

eunhaesaranghae July 14 2010, 15:02:03 UTC

HAHAHA thank you for your comment! It made my dayyyyy :) HAHAHAHAHA. Your perv mind too excited omg that made me laugh hahaha!

Yay thank you i'll try my bestest! hehehe thank you for reading and commenting! <3

eunhaelover July 13 2010, 17:14:23 UTC

SPOT. BRB.

eunhaelover July 13 2010, 17:34:12 UTC

TOP!HYUK WINS 8DDD /throwsconfettis.
-_- donghae why are you neglecting or should I say, REJECTING just because of the `what ifs` in your mind? D<
oh but persistent hyuk solved it!
smut was VERY VERY VERY interesting cause two virgins and doing it on a bench, yeap! pretty much super intense!
lmao at the SHINee remark! No wonder Jonghyun become such a perv with Key 8D

eunhaesaranghae July 14 2010, 15:03:06 UTC

HEHEHEHEHEHEHE was it that interesting! HEHEHE i'm glad you liked it though! Yeah that part was a bit random i couldn't think of what to write so i just added the shinee bit :D hehehehe that couple is hot too!

thank you for reading and commenting! <3