Comments | etoilelune: some ficlets before I sleep

etoilelune

some ficlets before I sleep

Mar 03, 2008 01:28

Steve rests on the bed, his eyes slowly starting to fall as sleep hits him. He wants nothing more than to sleep and wait for Alvaro to join him but it seems Alvaro has other ideas.

Alvaro stalks across the room with a devilish grin on his face and Steve groans. He’s not in the mood and he wants nothing more for Alvaro to just sleep. But there ( Read more... )

steven gerrard, martin skrtel, daniel agger, steve finnan, fernando torres, alvaro arbeloa

Comments 9

winter_solstice March 3 2008, 12:56:00 UTC

Agger/Skirtel rocks my boat! :D

etoilelune March 4 2008, 02:14:16 UTC

They really do. I want to see them play together

winter_solstice March 4 2008, 12:42:37 UTC

me too, i bet that would be fun! even though i love Sami to bits and want him to play more games too. :D

manuanya March 3 2008, 23:02:41 UTC

Agger/Skrtel ♥ so very powerful. love the roughness of it.

etoilelune March 4 2008, 02:14:43 UTC

They to me just work. The similarities yet differences makes it so intriguing.

aglaiya March 4 2008, 00:11:46 UTC

Love the first and the second. Okay it's not Fagger but both of them...

Sorry I cannot stand Nano/Stevie.... You wrote them in a perfect way, but.... sorry.

etoilelune March 4 2008, 02:14:55 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you commented. It means a lot

tie_dyed_vision March 4 2008, 02:35:02 UTC

The first one was so nice. Steve is always paired with Danny in my mind, but I really like Steve/Alvaro as well. They, together, are sweetness personified (the only thing that could be sweeter would be Alvaro/Fabio, but I'm sure they'd be hopeless as neither would be able to decide who wanted to top)

Moving on! I also loved the second story. I'm glad Martin has been adopted so quickly by us slashers, and the relationship with Danny is so very interesting, very complex, and I liked how you described that bit of a power struggle. (Not that this has anything to do with your fic, but I'll be curious to see if Martin ever finds a more peaceful pairing :P But until then, I can't really complain about Danny/Martin rough!sex.)

I wish I could give you feedback on the third, but I just really wasn't in the mood for Stevie/Nando :-/

etoilelune March 4 2008, 03:18:24 UTC

I really love the first one. I could see our pretty right backs being like this. Both are allegedly nice and just quiet and not into fame. So I could see them awww how cute of an argument is that. I thought Fab/Fernando would be cute as the pictures from Sunday prove Fernando quite likes the Brazilian.

The second one was interesting for me as I thought they would be like that you know. Both seem to be hardheaded and just. Angry. But I like them like that. I think it would be interesting to see Martin with a calmer pairing. I wrote him with Finns but I don't know. I may have to investigate further :P

No worries. I'm glad you left such wonderful feedback on the first two <3