Lie to Me fic: take the whole world with you when you go (1/1) pg

Jan 14, 2013 17:33

title: take the whole world with you when you go
Cal/Gillian, Emily, Ria, Zoe, Wallowski, 1292 words, pg

Author's notes: Thank you to my wonderful beta, tempertemper! This is what my writer's block turns into. A little angsty, a little sappy. In my head this is set post-series, as almost everything is now, but really it could fit in anywhere from the ( Read more... )

creative: writing, pairing: you were protecting me?, tv: human lie detectors

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ufp13 January 14 2013, 18:18:12 UTC
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! Angsty fluff! Me lurves it!

Yeah, but you let me open my eyes to my ex-wife, Gill. With no warning.
I cracked up at that line.

Thank you for brightening my evening with this lovely fic. :)

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etoilefilante January 14 2013, 23:05:10 UTC
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

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dacian_goddess January 14 2013, 21:14:01 UTC
Delicious fic. Loved the narrative format and the sharp, short parallels and the common thread of just. so. them. Extra-loved the main timeline, where they get to actually move forward with themselves.

God I miss this show

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etoilefilante January 14 2013, 23:06:09 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm really happy you enjoyed this and thought it in-character.

Oh man, me too.

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crumpled_up January 15 2013, 03:21:06 UTC
Yay! More LTM fic from you! Seeing this was such a nice treat. :D

I LOVE the structure of this. I always have a thing for parallel/what if situations. (One day I will try this out!) You did this wonderfully. It could be all angsty and horrible, but it turns out quite all right in the end. The line about waking up to Zoe made me laugh. That must've been quite a sight for him. ;) But really, the hand holding, the snuggling just about did me in. This kind of fluff is exactly what I need.

♥ ♥ ♥

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etoilefilante January 15 2013, 15:16:13 UTC
Aaah, thank you! Your comments always brighten my day. I'm glad you liked this so much! ♥♥♥

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vickysg1 January 15 2013, 14:25:12 UTC
Such a beautiful story. I love the angst, and I'm glad Cal is fine.

“Yeah, but you let me open my eyes to my ex-wife, Gill.
Priceless!

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etoilefilante January 15 2013, 15:16:41 UTC
Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you liked this.

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