SMPC: The Art of Letting Go

May 11, 2014 01:18

Written for the smpc

Title: The Art of Letting Go
Pairing:J2
Word count: 3500
Summary: Sequel to a moment out of time and life which is totally unecessary to read first if you don't want to. Basically, sometimes Jensen just needs to let go.
Warnings:NC-17, PWP, breath-play, fingering, dirty talk, light d/s, aftercare, sub!Jensen, dom!Jared.
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dom!jared, pwp, nc-17, breathplay, smpc, the art of letting go, sub!jensen, j2 au

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laurathelurker May 11 2014, 11:59:13 UTC
Loved having the Jensen POV and seeing his reluctance and feelings of inadequacy was very interesting. Hopefully Jensen will become more comfortable in the future believing that Jared really does understand and does enjoy it as well. And since you did say it is now an official verse I would love to see if you explore them more in the future.

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etoile_etiolee May 12 2014, 16:35:22 UTC
Thanks for your kind words. Apparently I can't even write PWP without adding a bit of h/c so that's why I decided to try and understand Jensen's POV. This is my first time writing dom/sub so I'm not sure I have everything right but it's a lot of fun to explore. Glad to see you're onboard with me.
<3<3<3

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jj1564 June 8 2014, 16:54:52 UTC
I love your h/c fics and I'm glad you added it to the mix here! I think as it's your first time writing dom/sub it works perfectly with them starting out and exploring it too.

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firesign10 May 11 2014, 12:43:25 UTC
Jesus, you just kill me :-D It's so fucking hot, but it's so much the incredible love and bond between the two of them that comes through. Jensen's need, Jared's care, the bubble of peace that follows. Scorching sex and amazing love - fantastic job, bb!!!!

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etoile_etiolee May 12 2014, 16:36:17 UTC
Thank you so much, bb. As you know, writing this fic was anything but easy so I'm glad I did an ok job with it.
*hugs*

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wendy May 11 2014, 16:31:44 UTC
This is so hot and intimate, but I gotta say...I literally teared up at that last bit about the socks. THAT is what sent me over the edge.

Amazing and wonderful.

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etoile_etiolee May 12 2014, 16:37:17 UTC
Thank you, and sorry for making you tear up. Apparently I can't even write PWP without my H/C kink kicking in :D
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to comment.
<3

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somer May 11 2014, 16:53:41 UTC
IT'S A VERSE :D

All the control and all the trust. So freaking hot :)

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etoile_etiolee May 12 2014, 16:38:19 UTC
It is a verse! Another story next month.
Thanks for the cheers, so glad you liked it and found it hot.
<3
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thestarkat May 12 2014, 05:20:31 UTC
Really delicious story, especially considering it was written in a hurry. I loved that they had a way they did things, but that Jared knew Jensen well enough to change the rules when he could tell Jensen needed him to. Perfect partnership. So hot and yet so loving.

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etoile_etiolee May 12 2014, 16:39:44 UTC
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it. Written in a hurry indeed, I'm the first one surprised that it turned out alright. :D I'll add another story in this verse next month.
<3
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