The Huntress -Chapter 13

[etoile_etiolee]

Comments

[phyllis2779]

Great installment. I really liked how you described the psychological states in this installment. No one can go through what Dean went through without some psychological damage to the whole family and you used that in this chapter very deftly.

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you for those kind words. I did try to work this out as a family matter, and of course Dean will have so psychological consequences, but he's strong, Sam's there for him, and Sumiko is too.
<3

[cillab42]

Enough hurt, they need some good. Great update.

[etoile_etiolee]

I'm done with the hurt in this story. Time for the boys to enjoy their family life and Angelia's arrival.
Thanks for commenting!
<3

[deansbellyrub]

After reading this chapter I feel so warm and fuzzy... the boys still have a long way to go before everything will be fine again (and does it ever get completely fine..??), but I love that Dean is slowly healing, at his own pace, and Sam is there for him, but also giving him space, cause he knows Dean better than anyone else. Sue's fits,oh poor thing, *cuddles her*, love the way you described her behaviour.
Another great one, can't wait to read what's next.:)

[etoile_etiolee]

Thank you, bb. I'm really touched that you liked this chapter so much because I worked hard on it to make it work.
<3

[jackien1968]

Awwwwwwww, I just wanna give Dean, Sam, and Sumiko giant smishing hugs.

*smishes etoile_etiolee*

J

[etoile_etiolee]

:)
*smishes you back*
I'll give my characters a hug from you.
<3

[obsidianromance]

Awww, poor Dean.
I felt so sad for him when Sue pushed him away.

But I am glad that things seem to be getting better. I cannot wait to meet little Angie. She is already such an interesting character!

Great job as always. Love you!

[etoile_etiolee]

Yes, it was hard, having Sumiko pushing Dean away, but it was also a trigger for Dean's healing. Really young kids reacts in all sorts of way to traumatism or changes. Sue is a strong headed, emotionnal little girl. I tried to imagine how she would express her fears and anger.

Thinking about you these last days. I really hope you're doing fine. *sending you all the positive thoughts I can manage*

Love you too. :)

[obsidianromance]

Thank you doll! I appreciate the love and positivity!!!! I am trying to overcome some dark stuff. Things got a bit worse but I am thinking positively and I know everything will get better in its own time.
I miss writing. :-(
But RL first!!!! *hugs*