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etoile_etiolee November 26 2012, 23:58:01 UTC
Wow, I'm so, sooo glad you liked that one because I hate the other I'm supposed to send you and keep reworking on it so I'm kind of relieved that this story made it for you.

I'm not giving up on the other story, though. Maybe as a Christmas present?

Love ya, thanks for commenting :D

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obsidianromance November 26 2012, 04:13:07 UTC
Great job! Thanks for being brave and participating in the challenge and sharing this story.
I was a total nervous-anxious-freak about writing/posting graphic birth stories, so I can relate to needing a bit of a cheering squad.
I enjoyed Jared's inner monologue as well as his attempt to stay calm but sometimes losing direction.

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etoile_etiolee November 27 2012, 00:01:50 UTC
Thank you for commenting! I'm glad you lied it.

The first mpreg I wrote had a graphic birth in it, but since it was part of a very long story, it felt like it was less of a challenge.

That was my first straight-on mpreg one-shot, and I'm glad I did it!

<3

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2people2 November 26 2012, 05:14:43 UTC
I loved it!!!! Great story!!!!!

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etoile_etiolee November 27 2012, 00:02:42 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it

:D

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rainbow1907 November 26 2012, 07:01:19 UTC
Totally awesome story!!! Love it :) Thank you very much!

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etoile_etiolee November 27 2012, 00:04:44 UTC
Thanks to you for reading and commenting.

Glad you liked it

<3

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ymmy12 November 26 2012, 07:52:55 UTC
loved it
any chance for more in this verse

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etoile_etiolee November 27 2012, 00:07:42 UTC
omg don't temp me. I have sooo many ideas for what could happen to them: just doesn't have enough hours in a day to write as much as I would like to.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

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yohkobennington November 27 2012, 01:34:46 UTC
We need moaaaaaaaaaaar!

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