Fic: Fair Play

Apr 04, 2008 17:32

Title:Fair Play Author:EtherealFlaim Rating:PG Fandom:Prison Break Characters:Michael, Sarah, Lincoln, Kellerman, Mahone... Summary:A lot of time has passed... Where Are They Now? Author's Notes:This is a combination of a lot of bunnies that I have had hopping around in my head... those which weren't nipping too hard at one another made it into this chapter of ( Read more... )

gen:prisonbreak, fic:series, fic:challenge, fandom:prisonbreak, fic

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Inspiration ekorotya April 4 2008, 23:45:00 UTC
Finally a fic with Mahone and Kellerman in it. I think you should definitly continue.

~E

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Re: Inspiration etherealflaim April 5 2008, 04:50:15 UTC
Hee! thanks =) The problem with most of these storylines is that my bunnies only go so far... I can keep getting them deeper and deeper into trouble, but I don't have very many resolutions in mind >=)

Thanks for reading!

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danni18 April 5 2008, 03:32:58 UTC
I liked it, it made you think about a lot of the things that could happen. I like how you left our some details about the Michael and sara's eascape. I was surprised kellerman was a bad guy again.

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etherealflaim April 5 2008, 04:52:00 UTC
=) Thanks!

That's kinda what I was trying to get at here in this chapter... though if I can continue, you might start to see that Kellerman isn't necessarily after what you'd think. Unless I change my mind, of course >=)

Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment!
~EF

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msgenevieve April 5 2008, 07:43:24 UTC
Oh, very twisty indeed. You *are* continuing it, right? *makes pleading motions with hands*

I have to admit the mental picture of Kellerman of snarkily preparing pancakes for Mahone made me grin (it shouldn't be perfect, but it was) and the rest has sucked me in to the point where I might have to make those pleading motions again.

Thanks for contributing to the challenge!

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etherealflaim April 9 2008, 22:34:25 UTC
Well, it would sure seem like it, based on the positive feedback =)

I can't very well leave my fans hanging, now can I? =P

The question merely remains: where to post the next chapter when I finish?

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torigates April 5 2008, 15:56:58 UTC
Hrmmm... very intriguing! And Kellerman! Whee!

This is really great, and it had me thinking the whole time, you should definitely continue it :)

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etherealflaim April 9 2008, 22:35:30 UTC
it had me thinking the whole time
yay! I was trying to at least reproduce something of the gotta-keep-moving-even-though-you-don't-know-crap-about-what-is-happening mood of the canon. =)

Thanks for reading!

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tuesdaeschild April 9 2008, 11:23:14 UTC
Would you do me a favour, sweetheart? Just put all thoughts of not continuing with it right out of your head!

There are too many tasty threads here to stop now! What's Lincoln up to? And when did Mahone slip Michael a razor? Will Kellerman leave Alex to rot? Will Alex get out? Too many!

And I always thought that Kellerman didn't die! I'd love to see him back in the show but for now I'm happy to see him here and being the bastard we all know and love!!

So...continue! Please? :)

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etherealflaim April 9 2008, 22:37:32 UTC
Oh, well if YOU want me to continue it... what could I possibly do but oblige?

There are too many tasty threads here to stop now!
But see, if I keep writing, I have to try to figure out how to tie them together and/or finish them out... I haven't thought that far ahead, lol

And I always thought that Kellerman didn't die!
Good characters don't die, they just bide their time...

being the bastard we all know and love!!
Oh, just wait. JUST WAIT. >=)

~EF

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tuesdaeschild April 10 2008, 08:58:54 UTC
Oh, well if YOU want me to continue it... what could I possibly do but oblige?

That's the spirit!! :o)

But see, if I keep writing, I have to try to figure out how to tie them together and/or finish them out... I haven't thought that far ahead, lol

Ah. That is a problem but I'm sure you'll overcome it with our encouragement!

Good characters don't die, they just bide their time...

Bwahahahahahaha!! Oh yeah!!

Oh, just wait. JUST WAIT. >=)

O_O!! Don't tease! Do it! *wriggles around in anticipation*

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etherealflaim April 10 2008, 21:49:15 UTC
Already posted, m'dear

=D
~EF

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