Fic: Falling (part 1)

[etherealflaim]

Title:Falling Genre:Slash (implied), AU (slight) Fandom:Terminator: The Sarah Connor Chronicles Characters:Derek Reese, Charley Dixon Summary:Derek finds a pleasant surprise waiting for him after a close encounter with death... Author's Notes:My first SCC fic. This is a little bit harder, as the characters are somewhat new.

Comments

[xenasoul]

I´m so sorry I took this long to comment! My internet was down for hours yesterday:)

I really liked the begining...I feel from them that they both need to love someone desperately...
Even if Charlie is married (I´m waiting to know how you´re gonna solve this), we saw that he doesn´t love his wife... Besides, I think that woman should go back to Desmond...lol

And Derek makes me want to pet him in my lap...lol
Charlie would be so good to him :)* grins *

*Sits and waits for chap.2*

[etherealflaim]

Thanks for the review!

After having read the second chapter, what did you think of how I dealt with the married!Charlie thing? It's something I had a debate about, and tried to include but not beat over the head.

~EF

[shirtless_guyz]

That was a good story!
Your very talented.