Comments | etherealflaim: Fic: Steam

etherealflaim

Fic: Steam

Feb 10, 2008 18:41

Title: Steam Rating: NC-17 Category: Slash, SlashSlash (3some), PWP, Brothercest Fandom: Prison Break Characters: Michael/Lincoln/Sucre Summary: Blowing off steam has never been this cramped. Warning: If you have any moral objection to just about anything, don't ( Read more... )

slash:michael/lincoln, slash:prisonbreak, fic:challenge, fandom:prisonbreak, fic

Comments 8

chanchito_z February 12 2008, 02:28:50 UTC

The first time he and Michael had come together in their cell, he had been so awkward and had almost fallen out of the bunk. Twice, he admitted to himself.

He and Lincoln had shared a girl more than once when Michael had come home from college and partied with his brother, why should it be any different with a guy?

You realize you are being a complete fic tease by mentioning these, right? :D I say, you need to write *those* now!

But this:

Michael had slid off of Sucre to curl up in the strong, protecting arms of his brother in the impossibly small space in front of the bench seats.

Made me go awwww...especially with Sucre looking out the window by himself. I'm so glad you've been inspired by these prompts!!

etherealflaim February 12 2008, 02:57:32 UTC

I'm glad you liked it! I was so worried that this would have a bad reception... I didn't know if it was too much porn or if it was too jumpy. I was hoping it wouldn't feel forced--it definitely flowed as I was writing it, but my brain sometimes works in subtle, disconnected ways so that's not necessarily saying anything.

You realize you are being a complete fic tease by mentioning these, right?
I hadn't thought about that, lol... I'm working on a longer fic based on (more like inspired by... I don't know if the bunny scene will ever actually get written, I'm two installments in and it keeps eluding me) a bunny I had, but maybe if I feel like writing something plotless I'll hit those =)

Made me go awwww...especially with Sucre looking out the window by himself.
I had not planned that... I had no idea how I was going to end the fic until I wrote it. It felt so perfect. And broke my heart, too =(

T

cont'd (fingers happened to slip and hit tab,enter) etherealflaim February 12 2008, 02:58:27 UTC

*hanks for reading!
~EF

niektete February 12 2008, 21:57:24 UTC

*comments wildly* Whoo! I did the same prompt - backseat and all - but yours was infinitely better; so much more action and... guh. Man porn! Yaaay!!

etherealflaim February 12 2008, 22:56:58 UTC

I did the same prompt - backseat and all - but yours was infinitely better
Nah, different doesn't equal better ;) And we're always our own worst critics.

guh. Man porn! Yaaay!!
Potentially the only kind I'll ever be able to write.... I have my doubts about my ability to write believable het.

I'm glad you enjoyed, and even more glad you commented to let me know that you did =)

~EF

pamalax February 15 2008, 03:22:25 UTC

Very hot! VERY!

Thanks for writing, do more of this kind of writing - does my icon do anything for you *g* - SOON

etherealflaim February 15 2008, 06:13:23 UTC

lol. Thanks for the vote of confidence! And it would be so much hotter if that were Linc instead of Mahone [/myopinion]

I'll try... I've got an idea to use a song or two as a basis for some PWP.

~EF

happywriter06 February 29 2008, 21:13:06 UTC

Don't worry Sucre, you can come to my house. Oh, wait. I'm not a guy but I do have tattoos. :-)

I wasn't expecting that ending but it does work.

I'm not sure how they fit either but I'd love imagining how they did.

He and Lincoln had shared a girl more than once when Michael had come home from college and partied with his brother, why should it be any different with a guy?
Now that's a line begging for a fic of it's own.