Comments | etharei: FIC: Second (warning: slash, PG-13, implied twincest)

etharei

FIC: Second (warning: slash, PG-13, implied twincest)

Apr 23, 2006 04:33

Very, very tired. Woke up early today to go to my violin lesson. Found that one needs to be more than half-awake to write good smut, but angst is easier to manage. I'm not actually very happy with this fic, and A Rude Awakening was only meant to be a one-off, but found that I had opened an interesting premise, and thus should see where I can go ( Read more... )

50passages, slash, fanfic

Comments 8

kenazfiction April 22 2006, 22:26:57 UTC

That last line SLAYED me! What a punch to the gut!

Oh, this hurt, this hurt. Please tell me some day Elrohir will find a little happiness? You're just killing me with this!

All the same, the language was lovely.

etharei April 23 2006, 17:28:16 UTC

Yay! Oh dear, I'm both extremely pleased and very sorry about the hurt being inflicted on the poor readers by this- does that make sense? And I do like happy endings, so maybe I'll be easy on him at the end.

Thank you so much, Kenaz!

erviniae April 23 2006, 00:00:42 UTC

Rei, my heart is breaking for Elrohir.....breaking.....
Well done, lovely angst!
Ervi

etharei April 23 2006, 17:30:27 UTC

::sends over Giant Band-Aid for Ervi's poor heart::

Thank you, sweets! I love angst, and I'm glad that you like this.

daeomae April 23 2006, 03:39:08 UTC

ACKKKK! Nooooooo! *beats head on desk effectively scaring the dog* Poor Elrohir! He just can't seem to win here. *sniffles* Rei, you gotta do something about this...please!!

*Mwah*

etharei April 23 2006, 17:34:07 UTC

Wow, you're really going through the lot! I *am* being rather mean to him here, aren't I? *giggles gleefully* I usually like happy endings, so I'll probably give him one here... eventually.

Thank you very much, Dae! I'm very gratified to hear that the fics caused the effect that I wanted them to, though I do hope you're not too hard on your poor head. And the desk.

NNNOOOOOO alasse_nin April 24 2006, 16:34:12 UTC

... :'( ... it's so beautiful... and heart-breaking! ... i can't say anything else right now... very close to tears! i love them TOGETHER... :'(

Re: NNNOOOOOO etharei April 24 2006, 19:03:05 UTC

Thanks sweetie! *huggles* I'm sorry it has upset you, though that was the intention. This is just not a very happy story arc, especially for poor Elrohir.