FIC: We Outgrow Love Like Other Things (2/3) (Stargate Universe)

[eternitywaits]

Title: We Outgrow Love Like Other Things (2/3) (Stargate Universe) (Part I can be found here.)
Author: eternitywaitsCharacters/Pairings: Rush/Chloe

Comments

[sexycazzy]

Wow...That was brilliant! God, that was very hot, what happened between Rush and Chloe ~ although it happened because Chloe was greifing...probably not the right thing to do... Wow...can't wait to see what happens next!

[eternitywaits]

Thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed it! :)

[jennithefluffy1]

I love it, I really love it! I find it all so believable, and I think you have the characters spot-on =]
Continuuuue xD

[eternitywaits]

Thank you! I'm really glad to hear about the characters, and the believability! I'm hoping to have the next part ready soon!

[storm_seeker]

Wow. Just...wow.

Mostly speechless at the moment. :)

Update again soon please. XD

[eternitywaits]

I hope to have the next part ready in the next couple of days. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for commenting. :):)

[nemo_r]

Phew, this is harsh. I like how you've dealt with it though. And the sex is good, not nice, but violent and fitting.

One nit-pick:
These stars are all wrong though, anyways, but he doesn't suppose Chloe would know enough astronomy to tell the difference.

I don't think a Brit would say 'anyways' and especially not an adult like Rush. He might say 'anyway', but I think more likely the word wouldn't be used at all.

[eternitywaits]

Ah thank you, I've taken the word out. I'm always grateful for instruction regarding speech patterns and accents, I haven't got an ear for it at all! Thanks again.

[elliev]

Normally, I don't read these sorts of fics because I can't suspend my disbelief enough but I was curious how you'd handle it. Fantastic!

[eternitywaits]

Thank you so much!