When We Collide - Harry/Louis - Chapter 5

[russsel]

Title: When We Collide
Pairings: Harry/Louis
Part: Chapter 5 of ?
Genre: AU, Romance
Rating: R
Summary: Harry and Louis live parallel lives where nothing much happens, but when the lines begin to intersect, they find themselves in situations bigger than either of them have ever bargained for.
♔ PROLOGUE || CHAPTER ONE || CHAPTER TWO || CHAPTER

Comments

[skiptothelu]

Well, I've read as far as you've written and I adore this. I really like how you're able to change pov's without breaking flow. You've got an easy (as in easy to read) plot, without taking away from the darker tendencies (aka Louis' storyline). The fight was great, well written, not too many details to get the reader away from the action and intensity of the scene. I really like Louis and Harry's blossoming friendship and the roles each of these people are taking on. I look forward to reading more from you.

[russsel]

thank you so much! it was kind of an experiment for me, the switching POVs, and so far, i'm liking how it's turned out. i'm glad you're enjoying it and yeah, i didn't want a lot of distractions during the fight scene because that was one of the scenes i was really anticipating writing so i'm happy that you liked it! thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this amazing comment!

[henny4you]

Great chapter!
I absolutely love that Liam and Zayn were friends and now I sort of wonder where it all went wrong for him. :(
I hope Liam and Louis can show Harry that he at least have some good qualities. (yes i may be a bit biased, lol)

Noo, I'm scared about Caroiline now! We all know what happened irl, haha. STAY AWAY FROM LOUIS' MAN ! :D

[russsel]

thank you!

yeah, i didn't want zayn to be bad just because. i wanted to give them all reasons to do what they do and hopefully i'll get more out of zayn in future chapters! (i love him too and it killed me to make him the "bad guy"!)

haha, yes, exactly!

thank you so much!

[k_sewell1d]

as always, a lovely chapter! looking forward to reading more!

[russsel]

thank you for staying with it and for this perfect comment!

[hey_whatsoever]

Just discovered this fic and read all the chapters this morning. I'm hooked! The prologue was extraordinary, I was drawn in straight away wanting to know what had happened to Louis. You write the Zayn-as-abuser persona really well and the friendships and history between the characters are fascinating.

Can't wait for more. :)

[russsel]

wow, thank you so much! at first, i only wanted to focus on louis and harry's relationship but i thought that all the other characters have so much potential to let them go to waste so i decided to make them all connected somehow. again, thank you so much, i'll have the next chapter posted as soon as i can!

[sophi3g]

I read the prologue to this a while back when you first posted, but I haven't had a chance to catch up on the rest till now. I read all the other chapters this morning though, and I'm really liking how this is turning out. I'm intrigued by all the connections between the boys, especially Liam and Zayn and Liam and Niall! Can't wait for more! x

[russsel]

thank you so much, i'm glad you're enjoying it!