5 Reasons why Jin wore that sweater

Nov 06, 2007 23:53

Yay, a fic!  Inspired by Jin's ugggh sweater choice in the Keep the Faith PV.  Written while I should have been doing something else - as usual - and un-beta'ed - also as usual - so dear friends, please tell me if this sucks ass.  Well, maybe not in such harsh terms, but yes.  Anyway...yay, fic!  *is extremely pleased with herself*

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akanishi jin, fanfiction: je, fanfiction: akame, fanfiction: mine

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becroberts November 7 2007, 18:40:36 UTC
When you say "all the relevant comms" I do hope you're including ficwars in that category? Hey, it even fits in this month's theme!

*whispers* I actually like Jin's fashion sense. Given half a chance, I'd steal his wardrobe - with or without him, though preferably with. ^_^

who some would argue had exactly half a brain, and maybe less on Mondays

Second line in and you've already got me laughing. I love little throwaway bits like this!

patented Kamenashi Kazuya tantrum that would most likely include: 1) no sex, 2) no dinner and 3) long hours in the batting cages while Jin wasted away sans sex and food.

Aww...I can just see Jin now, lingering pathetically in the corner while Kame hits things, hoping all the while that his other half will take pity on him and feed him. And after that...

Eyes fixed on the TV where Yamapi was clapping and singing a nursery rhyme

I wish I'd had that when I was a child. I'm sure Yamapi would've been much better than Sesame Street.

Kame wearing rubber ducky pajamas with his hair sticking up out of a hair tie ( ... )

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eternalotome9 November 7 2007, 23:22:16 UTC
Yay, your reviews are always good for long critiques, which I adore. <33 Ahem:

1) Yup, it's up at ficwars. Why wouldn't it be? XD The theme thing was total luck, btw, which was pretty cool.

2) Heh, I know you do. I actually really like his fashion sense when it's NOT in a KT thing - Yukan Club, for example, gives him nice clothes. The fuzzy sweater was sooo bad though. People are going to start saying he's fat again and he's not, he's NOT. *fumes* Why would they do that to their lead singers? I just don't get it at all.

3) The throwaway lines are very emblematic of my thought patterns, actually XD so they tend to show up more when I'm writing spur of the moment. I'm glad it worked for you!

4) Hehe, is it bad that the image of Jin wasting away and whining pitifully kind of amused me? I see why you make things so hard for him. =P5) Yamapi might not be the best thing to show your kids, actually: he gives the cops the middle finger right at the end of that scene. It's my favorite part of Kurosagi - I watched it on ( ... )

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becroberts November 8 2007, 19:01:30 UTC
2)People are going to start saying he's fat again and he's not, he's NOT. *fumes* Why would they do that to their lead singers? I just don't get it at all.

Maybe it's a secret plan by Ueda supporters to make Ueda the number one in KAT-TUN, since he's ditched his gothic guise in favour of being a perky redhead. (And since Kame's already a perky redhead, maybe there can be only one?) They figure, hide Kame under a load of miscellaneous fabric and mess up his hair, then give Jin a sweater that hides him completely (and hints at eating disorders, body image issues and all sorts of things that would help Ueda in his rise to the top).

4) Hehe, is it bad that the image of Jin wasting away and whining pitifully kind of amused me? I see why you make things so hard for him. =P

It's not bad at all! Jin suffers very cutely, as shown over the years.

6) I found it so funny that he actually wears his hair that way. At first, I thought it was just for NwP, but no, he's really that silly.Yep, and that's why we love him. ^_^ Makes him look like a ( ... )

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thinking_lotus November 8 2007, 11:44:25 UTC
heeeeee! that was cute, looking forward to seeing the other reasons.

see if you can work in the fuzziness somewhere. That sweater would be OK if it had one less thing happening and my candidate for elimination is the fuzz.

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eternalotome9 November 8 2007, 15:51:42 UTC
Yosh! Explaining of the fuzz will be in reason #2. =D

Why is my Akame always cute...*fails at hot and sexy T_T* I just always want them to be happy and domestic together.

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thinking_lotus November 8 2007, 16:09:23 UTC
cute is good though! there is not enough cute in the world imo.

anyway, I have an imagination and I'm perfectly capable of using it ;-)

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sanctified_x December 16 2007, 09:56:58 UTC
K, I could have sworn I left a comment to this... maybe it was on the comm posting. ( it's nearly 2 AM have mercy on mehhhh )

So. I have decided to add you to my friends list. I am looking forward to seeing your flailing all over my page because I flail too and I think we'll get along just fine.

P.S: Crack is awesome. O_O

Wow, this comment really did not go as I planned...

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