TotA, [canto five]: "A Cappella" (Luke fon Fabre gen)

[kill_me_faster]

I SHOULD BE finishing those drabbles for the request meme I started, but alas, whilst formulating an idea for one of the later ones, I came up with the basis for this fic that just wouldn't. Go. Away. DDDD:

Title: A Cappella (Without Accompaniment)
Author: Lorelei DiAngelo. My name is not intended to be Sue-ish in any way related to this fandom.

Comments

[bleedingsand]

*blinks a few times* ... wow. WOW. Imagery is great, and the way Luke's mind is torn and the way he references the other characters and...

[kill_me_faster]

XD;; I'm sensing a "but" coming along here. Eh, don't worry, I think it's kind of wonky, too. But the idea wouldn't leave me alone until I'd beaten it out on the ol' keyboard, so. *shrug*

On a random note, why is the fox in your icon SO MUCH LARGER than the puppy? I feel like it's one of those pictures where the next image in the series is going to be the fox with the puppy's mangled corpse in it's mouth dripping blood and the quote, "Foxes? Eating YOUR animals? It's more likely than you think. (Free PC check!)" or something like that.

[bleedingsand]

It's late, so no "but" now. I'm not catching anything right now.

... it's a fox and her cub. This is the original (and so damn cute).

[kill_me_faster]

...oh. That's why. I was totally interrogating that picture from the wrong perspective, laff.

I'm just being paranoid, I guess, 'cuz you're the first commenter I've gotten all day. Sorry. D: But I AM making progress in the drabble meme and that makes me happy. I MAY ACTUALLY FINISH ONE. IT'S A MILESTONE.

(You, sleep! Shoo! Catch your Z's! ^___^)

[meimi]

Oh, that was an interesting read. Please don't tell me you stuck Lorelei in there, he's been through enough already. First Yulia, the planet at large, and then Van. :( Sticking him with the two redheaded idiots is just mean... not that I haven't done it already either. *coughs*

[kill_me_faster]

Uh...that was my intention? ^___^;; I'm glad you caught it, though I am a bit saddened to see that my idea wasn't as original as I thought...

*UH...PHAILS?*

...they really are quite something, aren't they.

[meimi]

Heehee. Just because you weren't the first to think it up doesn't mean it's a bad idea. :P I know ruaki had a thing for the Lorelei connection even before I wrote Home and rheoster has an comic idea involving it. XD Lorelei gets around a lot it seems.

D: Luke and Asch plus anybody else is a scary combination that is bound to turn into a disaster of cataclysmic proportions.

[kill_me_faster]

I love that freaking Doctor Mambo skit where Asch is all like, "EVERY TIME I'M AROUND YOU PEOPLE, SOMETHING LIKE *THIS* HAPPENS". XD Oh, Asch. It's like gravity. It keeps sucking you back in.

[kill_me_faster]

I wish I hadn't been so twitchy yesterday when I wrote this because I rather liked the premise, too. But I think I sort of failed at fleshing it out the way it deserved to be fleshed out. I really want to turn this into a plotfic or a roleplay or something...I imagine it would be fun. LENGTHY, AND POSSIBLY SOUL-EATING, BUT FUN.

Ah, well. The response for this was small, but I'm glad that the few people who did read it were intrigued by it. ^___^

[hikari_cyhan]

Because everyone assumes that BigBang!Luke is happy.

But wow. Disturbing and great imagery. I like it.

[kill_me_faster]

Oh, there's no way in HELL he's happy. Even if he's one, or the other, or both mixed into one, or something else entirely... There's just, ALWAYS going to be this part of him that's lacking. *shrug* Then again, I'm an evil bitch who loves to torture people. ^___^;;

[replica]

oooh, that was quite interesting! I really like the idea of Lorelei being within LukeAsch, so it was awesome to see it pop up in here :D

[kill_me_faster]

Your icon is positively adorable. ^___^ Not like the two of them COULD actually plan anything, though. XD;; Not without it ending in blunt-force trauma to SOMEBODY'S head.

[replica]

heheh, solerika made it. it comes from the first comic anthology, which is full of adorable-ness :D I agree, I don't think they could plan anything without SOME kind of disaster resulting, but it's fun to imagine nonetheless XD