"Single"

Aug 11, 2014 18:19

If she is “Single”,
    She is ought to “Mingle”
The world is “paired” in two,
    As if she didn't “knew” !

She is sick of this “advice”
    From every Aunt, ally and allies -
              Go find your “mate”
             And trust your “fate”
“How ab’t fixing a steamy coffee date?”
(It always ends up in Checkmate)

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tonithegreat August 13 2014, 01:34:09 UTC
Oh, so many meddlers out there! Glad you can have a little fun with it while making fun of it with a poem.

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eternal_ot August 13 2014, 06:18:25 UTC
Ha! You bet..;)...I'm enjoying it more now coz you all find it as funny as I do..:) (Phew! I ain't a weirdo afterall..:P ) Good to see ya drop by..<3 Thanks!

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rayaso August 13 2014, 02:31:11 UTC
This was such a fun poem! I loved the rhymes and the structure, especially the last two lines.

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eternal_ot August 13 2014, 06:20:55 UTC
Hey! that's so good to hear..:) was gonna write an essay on "Being single" but then.. now I guess poem was not a bad idea at all..Thank you so much for stopping by ..<3

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kickthehobbit August 13 2014, 03:08:52 UTC
Awww, I thought this was cute. I definitely know about that little rhyme.

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eternal_ot August 13 2014, 06:23:20 UTC
Wow..I like "Cute"...ah! yes indeed..:) Thanks for stopping by <3

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i_17bingo August 13 2014, 08:11:55 UTC
Somehow this manages to be adorable and frustrating at the same time. It's like you're not even allowed to be a person until someone else calls you "his" person. Ugh.

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eternal_ot August 13 2014, 10:56:33 UTC
Aww...that's sweet of you to say..:)..'It's like you're not even allowed to be a person until someone else calls you "his" person.Ugh.'...exactly!!..:/..Good to see ya stop by..:) Thanks.

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roina_arwen August 13 2014, 19:05:44 UTC
The rhymes seem a little forced, but I appreciate the underlying sentiment. :)

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eternal_ot August 14 2014, 05:28:42 UTC
Heh! yeah they were suppose to make you "groan"..:)..thanks..glad the sentiments got conveyed without sounding rude..(I am still doubtful ab't that)...Good to see ya..<3 *hugs*

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