The Game called Life

[eternal_ot]

Wanna see what you’re playing for?
Why ‘ya wanna see what you’re playing for?

The finish lines’ still blur,
And the race is On!

Very few will achieve,
What you are craving for!

Fame & Immortality,
Are the luxuries of God.

While the rest of us,
Will be deceased and gone.

Take it easy,
Take it slow.

Live in the moment,
And let it go!

The 'happy place

Comments

[adoptedwriter]

I love the message in this poem! Cool photo too! AW

[eternal_ot]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it..:) I loved the pic too. Happy to see you stop by <3

[bleodswean]

An intriguing premise! I particularly loved these lines - Fame & Immortality,
Are the luxuries of God.

While the rest of us,
Will be deceased and gone.

[eternal_ot]

Thanks..:) The poem is kind of self-analysis of why I want to write..So, yeah..becoming Immortal via words is the best way to survive according to me..;)..:)
Glad you found it interesting..and those are my favourite lines too. Happy to see you stop by..<3

[whipchick]

This is so enthusiastic! Really reflects your love of life :)

[eternal_ot]

Thanks! Glad to know it came across..:) The poem was a result of asking things to myself..and I did want it to end on a happy note.
Happy to see you stop by..<3

[dmousey]

But the travelogues will testify,
That the journey was worthwhile

All I could do was smile at this line. Thanks for penning, Peace~~~D

[eternal_ot]

And reading this made me *smile* too..:) I always hope I'll have a journey to boast about in the end..;)..though right now my life looks to be very ordinary..:P
Thanks a ton for stopping by..<3

[halfshellvenus]

But the travelogues will testify,
That the journey was worthwhile,
I liked that this could be both a literal vacation and also just the journey through life itself.

Neat photo!

[eternal_ot]

Thanks for the appreciation..:) I would love to be a wanderer though I know it wouldn't be a great choice to make...
Happy to see you stop by..<3 even I loved the pic ..:)