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[tb/x - seishirou/subaru] lineage (4/?)

Jan 25, 2010 15:02

Linage
Chapter 4
By: White Rain
Disclaimer: I do not own Tokyo Babylon/X.
Genre: Drama would be the closest fit.
Characters/Pairings: in this part, Seishirou/Subaru
Word Count: 1,501
Rating: NC-17, but the sex isn't graphic.
Contains/Warnings: ( cut for spoilers )

ship: seishirou/subaru, fandom: tokyo babylon, fic: linage, fandom: x

Comments 14

blackcrow1 February 10 2010, 00:49:00 UTC

Uhm... I wonder if the first scene, that's also placed a month after Subaru arrived to Seishirou's castle, is the prelude for the first time Subaru enjoied having sex with him... and Seishirou seems to have a thing for tying Subaru but Subaru doesn't seem to mind...
I wonder who hurts Seishirou and why he doesn't want Subaru to heal him... does he fear they kind of develop a 'merging of consciousness'?
The rape thing was kind of scary, especially considering it seems to be born by miscommunication. Seishirou was trying to care about him but Subaru was too deep in his self loath... or am I wrong?
I'm not quite sure why Subaru couldn't heal Seishirou... had Seishirou put him under a spell before asking him to do that?
And yes, Seishirou paddling Subaru is hot in a twisted sort of way and his way of conforting him after paddling him his cute in a twisted sort of way as well...

a_white_rain February 10 2010, 01:34:07 UTC

Uhm... I wonder if the first scene, that's also placed a month after Subaru arrived to Seishirou's castle, is the prelude for the first time Subaru enjoied having sex with him...
haha I actually didn't think of that. I think I may work that in in some way. It's an interesting thought.

I wonder who hurts Seishirou and why he doesn't want Subaru to heal him... does he fear they kind of develop a 'merging of consciousness'?
This will be expanded in later chapters.

The rape thing was kind of scary, especially considering it seems to be born by miscommunication.
That's not wrong at all, given what I've written so far.

Seishirou was trying to care about him but Subaru was too deep in his self loath... or am I wrong?
Seishirou was showing concern for Subaru, and Subaru did push him away. But not because of his self-loathing, but because Seishirou felt different. Seishirou didn't like that response. There are plot reasons, but he's also Seishirou. Who is kind of possessive.

I'm not quite sure why Subaru couldn't heal Seishirou... had ( ... )