Comments | etchedinclouds: [PoT] Falling (Niou/Yagyuu)

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[PoT] Falling (Niou/Yagyuu)

Dec 27, 2006 13:15

Title: Falling
Pairing: Niou/Yagyuu
Rating: PG-13 for D1 smexiness :3
Approx. word count: 787
Phrase #20: "We're all inside of nothing"
Summary: Written for 25phrase. Of summer in Tokyo, shooting stars and whispered wishes. 750 words

( Because they are Niou and Yagyuu, it is so easy to assume everything about them. )

fandom: prince of tennis, author: dystopiarcadia, pairing: niou/yagyuu

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kai882 March 1 2007, 21:41:31 UTC

This was really, really beautiful. Thank you so much. ♥

dystopiarcadia March 1 2007, 22:32:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it. :)

penalservitude March 21 2007, 15:52:27 UTC

This conveys such a beautiful, dreamy kind of feeling. ♥
:DDDD D1 + Syl FTW!

dystopiarcadia March 21 2007, 23:15:39 UTC

*squishes you* Thank you beautiful! I think this is still one of my favourite pieces of writing (but at the same time now I'm all "damn, why can't I do it again?" XD)

giving_ground March 21 2007, 16:52:50 UTC

Because they are Niou and Yagyuu, they are content to let the rest of the world believe in the tale they have spun (because sometimes, the line between reality and fantasy blur, and they almost believe they directed the movie of their lives). It’s easy when the script’s already been written by the collective subconscious, after all.

Somehow parts of this fic feel a bit like us. Maybe. Sometimes. A little.

dystopiarcadia March 21 2007, 23:16:34 UTC

Hmmmmm. Yes. ♥

Thanks for the pimping, btw. :D

giving_ground March 22 2007, 07:56:52 UTC

It's sort of odd because you wrote this before we were really... well, you know. *laughs* ♥

alle_goriest March 21 2007, 16:53:27 UTC

I love this. It makes my heart pound. ♥!

dystopiarcadia March 21 2007, 23:17:13 UTC

Oh, thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :D

(nice icon, btw :)

alle_goriest March 23 2007, 00:33:54 UTC

Of course! I hope to see more. :D

& thank yoooou right back! And, after glancing at your userinfo, hooray for another TeniPuri fan who also knows Gundam Wing! ♥___♥ *cling*

dystopiarcadia March 23 2007, 01:03:45 UTC

Well I posted all my finished fics on this comm (and the dying/dead WIPs are lurking around my LJ somewhere XD) and I'm hoping to finally finish something soon!

OMG Gundam Wing! I was just thinking when I went back home last weekend that I fancied watching Endless Waltz again... *glomps*

SHOCK! I now realize a tragic lack of Gundam Wing icons.. I'll have to fix that! :O

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