New RPS fic - Joe/Nick - you oughta be in pictures

[estrella30]

Thanks to media for telling me what was wrong with this fic and then helping me make it right. YOU ARE THE QUEEN.

Title - you oughta be in pictures
Pairing - Joe/Nick
Rating - Adult
Word Count - 3900
Warnings - This fic takes place now-ish but completely ignores the existence of Jemi. Sorry? I figure it's ok because the other thing I'm working on

Comments

[mediaville]

\o/ Now I get to tell you everything I really LIKE about it! The BEST is Nick being all competitive with Joe, when Joe's all, "Oh, Garbo does it, but you don't have to," was PERFECTION. Very sneaky Joe! This is exactly how to get your little douchetart of a brother to do something sexy. MAKE HIM JEALOUS.

And then UNF. First-time fingering! And Nick goes from being all shocked-curious about it when he's watching the couple on screen to then all, "YEAH, DO IT," when Joe starts poking around down there and then minutes later he's nutting off fantasizing about Joe fucking him. He's a little SLUTTY, okay? And I LIKE THAT.

Also, I really liked this:

He waits for the freakout he was expecting to come, and when it doesn't he lets himself smile stupidly at Joe, full on with teeth and everything.

"So...hey," Nick says.

Joe grins back. "Hi."It feels really natural, and not forced at all. Like sometimes people feel tempted to make them be all, "YAY NOW WE'RE BOYFRIENDS," or worse, "AIEEE WHAT HAVE WE DONE," but this seems so boyish

[estrella30]

AH HA. YOU ARE ADORABLE. and wonderful. thank you so much again for all your help on this.

and YAY!! Im glad you had parts you really liked! this was supposed to be like, quick fast something short to post and wound up...uhm, NOT being that. sigh. clearly I fail at writing 500 words of just porn. I will try harder! I promise!

and yeah, the angsty nick is like, nick being all ANGRY and ANNOYED at joe and demi being so LOVEY DOVEY and stupid PROMISE rings and crap. and then he kind of...uhm, DUB CONS joe into fucking him to, you know, show him all he could be missing out on. and then joe has to CHOOSE.

or something EQUALLY horrible like that. that's kind of just where my brain has been lately. AH HA. WHOOPS?

[farewells]

ahahaha the texting in the beginning!

ajshdkasaaskjd HOT. they should watch porn together more often...

[estrella30]

YAY!! thank you!!

and yeah, I TOTALLY peg joe as the type to like, call/text nick the MINUTE he walks away. like, "ok, when you just said bye right now? did you mean just BYE or BYE FOR NOW or BYE till I see you LATER or what? and oh, hey, you want to go get some pizza??"

only with like, a lot more misspelled words.

[farewells]

ahahahahahahahah BUT SERIOUSLY. oh hoseph.

[estrella30]

aww, thank you so much, sweetie! I'm glad you liked it!

[estrella30]

Joe is a TRICKSY DUDE, you know?

and thank you!

[itsthedetails]

It is now my personal canon that Joe goads Nick into watching porn with him then gives him a smokin' hot blowjob. Mmmm, this is so perfect.

[estrella30]

haha - dude, I'm totally sure Joe DOES.

thank you!