Thanks to
mediaville for kind of EVERYTHING on this. She's read this story more times than any human can be expected to, helped me fix it when it wasn't working right, gave the best suggestions, and wouldn't let me trash it the fifteen times I sent it to her screeching "That is IT. I am DONE WITH THEM ARGH
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And of course that ridiculously hot handjob--Mmmm, I love the idea of Nick making nonsense noises and chanting Joe's name, because he's losing control. HOT!
Please be writing more Joe/Nick!!!
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and yeah, at first I was like, HRM, is that TOO douchey, if he's just screwing with him? and then I remembered that there's nothing thats TOO douchey for nick jonas.
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thank you again!!
(also, I will write more joe/nick if YOU write more joe/nick TOO :D )
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"I was getting Lakers updates on my phone," Nick gasps. "Kobe hit like, six three-pointers. I almost pissed myself not changing the channel."
But seriously, Joe. Meryl Streep and a handjob? That's the best you could come up with?"
AHAHAHHAHAHAHHA. THIS WAS SO GLORIOUS. (and then the eeeeeeeeend. more of that, plz.)
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and thank you!
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I totally thought there was something wrong with Nick because, let's face it: Nick can't act to save his life. But I think he would be able to it to get into Joe's pants. Nick Jonas always wins.
God, Nick really is the most magnificent bastard.
P.S. you have 'doesn't' misspelled a few times.
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and thank you!
(also, ack! thank you, I'll fix them asap. mwah!)
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And also, I said it before, but I love the part when Nick is like, "Bzuh? Why would you think I don't like being cuddled? I LOVE BEING CUDDLED." It's so sweet and earnest and kind of injects some real affection in the midst of all of the hilarity (LOL ACE OF BASE). And then it gets really SEXY and that is really, really great.
SO. Now that this WIP of doom is out of your way, the decks are clear for more, right? *is greedy*
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as for whats next - HAHAHA - that is a BIG SEEKRIT from YOU. it is a SURPRISE.
(well, ok, not really, but kind of. *beams*)
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I love that Joe is freaking out, like, really obviously, and Nick is such a jerkbag that he just keeps going. It's such a brotherly dynamic, and then the ending is so sweet. But also supa-dupa hot. Which is how I prefer all my brotherly dynamics, TBH.
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:D
thank you so much, I'm super stoked you liked it!
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