babyfic 5 - (now, with bonus added wincest!)

Nov 26, 2006 10:39

*facepalms*

Yes. I'm dirty. I've wincested up the babyverse. *facepalms MORE*

But! They're not all going to be wincesty. Promise. We'll call it 50/50. (Though the next one will be wincest too. sorry!) But yeah. This is the very beginning of Sam/Dean in this universe. Hope you like it!

Thanks to keepaofthecheez for the beta! This is for wendy(all previous parts are ( Read more... )

oh god it's babyfic, spn fic

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reikah November 26 2006, 15:44:46 UTC
VICTORY

okay reading now. promise.

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reikah November 26 2006, 15:50:00 UTC
oh, baby, i LOVE YOU. LONG TIME. SERIOUSLY. This was like... schmoop sundae with schmoop syrup and a schmoop wafer, and that might just be the stupidest simile ever but so what. you make me this way! *flails*

“She was up,” Sam tried to explain. Dean rolled his eyes and reached out for Melissa who was twisting and squirming in Sam’s arms to get to Dean. “Hey, momma,” Dean said quietly. Melissa gurgled and laughed and twisted her fist in Dean’s undershirt. “You sleep good, baby?”

If that isn't the most adorable mental image ever, I don't know what is.

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estrella30 November 27 2006, 15:32:17 UTC
my friends are ALL DIRTY.

*puts head down*

MWAH! thank you, baby!!

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way2busymom November 26 2006, 15:50:57 UTC
Dammit. *flails* Dammit.

I think you broke me.

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estrella30 November 27 2006, 15:32:47 UTC
*kiss kiss*

in a good way though, I hope!

*g*

thank you!

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wendy November 26 2006, 15:55:03 UTC
He wanted this family. He wanted Melissa. He wanted Dean. He wanted this, and when Sam realized that, he knew he’d do anything to make that happen.

It was inevitable Sam....best to give in now!

The last two paragraphs are perfect and beautiful and make me GLOW with happiness. I love that Dean is resistant and a little scared but still willing to listen to his heart. I love that Sam just kisses him softly. I love them image of the two of them tangled together at the end.

They ARE a family. *cuddles all three of them*

Thank you Nan-baby! Haaaaappy Sunday!

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estrella30 November 27 2006, 15:36:11 UTC
yes! give in, sammy!

thank you, baby! they are SUCH a family - yes!

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audrarose November 26 2006, 15:55:12 UTC
oh, GOD. I've been resisting this b/c, dude, my LIFE is a baby-verse and I avoid kid-fic on just general principles, but GOD.

If you're going to make them a couple? And give us this:

but even more than that, with her, the three of them were happy. Honest to god happy, and Sam couldn’t remember the last time he felt that way

well, that's it, DAMMIT ALL. Love. lovelovelove. So, so wonderful. Now I'm going to go read the rest. :D

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estrella30 November 27 2006, 15:36:50 UTC
DAMMIT ALL, AUDRA! I know!

*giggles*

thank you!

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estrella30 November 27 2006, 15:37:27 UTC
hee! yes! I couldnt help it!

thank you so much!

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