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[esther_91]

Title: The Last Time (Maybe)
Pairing(s): Alan Smith/Darren Fletcher
Rating: R
Warning(s):  Slightly angst-flavoured. Written from Darren's POV.
Summary: Darren deals with Alan's move to newcastle.

Author’s Notes:  This comes late, I know - I wanted to write it ages ago, but I just didn't manage to, what with all the packing and stuff x/ Well,

Comments

[thememoryslides]

so good. I really liked your take on it, there hasnt been a lot with these two ever but I like them and seeing Darren in a serious fic is always a bonus.

I really liked the flow of the fic and the ending was gorgeous.

“Take some of mine. Shouldn’t be a problem, I can send yours over once they’re dry.”

(Deep inside, you know that you won’t.)

beautiful ♥

[esther_91]

:)) Thanks so much for your lovely comment! *is all smiles*

I thought I'd write poor Darren serious for once after he has to suffer all this weird dance movements and self-hypnosis accidents I write him into.. ;P

[kobean]

no words, no words.
i am in love with your writing. and your ability to grasp each characterisations. darren is so fcking adorable. ♥ and the addition of the shrek and wayne's autobiography and his thoughts and everything. perfect. *bows down to you*

thank you for this. :)

[esther_91]

- you're welcome :))

perfect. *bows down to you*
*blushes furiously upon reading this and bows down as well, melting a tiny little bit in the progress* aw, thank you just so much! :D

and, adding wayne's autpbiography was a must-do. because i am so madly in love with it. as i say, it's not the most philosphical book ever. but he's brave and writes it just the way it is. which is ♥

(oy, alan/darren icons ftw. :P)

[haishinlu]

I watched the game against Sunderland yesterday and didn't even miss Alan. Now, I feel extremely guilty. It was just brilliant, everything. Darren is love.

[esther_91]

Darren is love.
Absolutely :D

( and now I feel guilty for making you feel guilty. in a ...weird and good sort of way :P thank you so much for your comment and the flowera! ^^ )

[aeroporto]

Wow, that was amazing. And the way you characterized Alan and Darren (and Rio :P) is just brilliant. I'm speechless and that doesn't happen very often. Just wow.

[esther_91]

Thanks so much! :))
It doesn't happen very often either that people are speechless because of something I did >_> *is speechless because of your speechlessness* *hugs you*

[grumpygaz]

♥ ALAN/DARREN.. *dies*
i love them dudes, and i loved this fic.
Poor Darren, *giggles* He's such a cute geek.
I loved the ending “Take some of mine. Shouldn’t be a problem, I can send yours over once they’re dry.”

(Deep inside, you know that you won’t.)

[esther_91]

Darren is the most awesome geek ever. And I love writing him, because I can just imagine him to be geeky on the surface and really, really insecure beneath it ^^

And thanks so much for your lovely comment, as well :))